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My Opinion about Blog To its fans, it is addictive. To the Internet, it is a kind of attractive service. Blog, an on-line diary that can record and express the author’s feelings, experience, and stories on the websites is fast gaining popularity the world over. It plays a role in our work and daily life so significant that people regard is as an indispensible partner. There are several reasons to account for my standpoint. To begin with, blog have become a bridge to communicate with people in various countries. For instance, more and more foreigners, male or female, the young or the senior, can get the latest news of World Expo 2010 Shanghai China when they access to the authoritative blog. Furthermore，blog have shorted the distance between rural areas and cities. The individuals, especially the young who live in the countryside can get all kinds of fashionable trends in the metropolises with Blog. And finally, blog can improve the communication with our friends. Dozens of people who are far away from their hometown not only show their love, joy, but also display their hate, fear, and grief and so on in the blog. Subsequently, our friends can read the Blog and get to know how about us. Despite few seniors do not interested in the blog. Personally, I think it is a vital companion。Blog is to us what flower is to the gardens. Only with the blog booming, our living of Internet will be more amazing. |
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sima022225(金币+5, 外语EPI+1):thanks for your time and work~ 2010-05-26 14:13:17
飞翔的自由(金币+5): 2010-05-28 16:50:39
sima022225(金币+5, 外语EPI+1):thanks for your time and work~ 2010-05-26 14:13:17
飞翔的自由(金币+5): 2010-05-28 16:50:39
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My Opinion about Blog To its fans, it is addictive. To the Internet, it is a kind of attractive service. Blog, an on-line diary that can record and express the author’s feelings, experience, and stories on the websites is fast gaining popularity the world over. It plays a role in our work and daily life so significant that people regard is as an indispensible partner. The blog is now as obsession for its fans and as attracting service for websites. As an online diary, it can record and express the authors’ feelings and experiences and has gained ever-growing popularity worldwide. It plays such a significant role in our work and daily life that most people take it as their indispensable partner. There are several reasons to account for my standpoint. To begin with, blog have become a bridge to communicate with people in various countries. For instance, more and more foreigners, male or female, the young or the senior, can get the latest news of World Expo 2010 Shanghai China when they access to the authoritative blog. Furthermore，blog have shorted the distance between rural areas and cities. The individuals, especially the young who live in the countryside can get all kinds of fashionable trends in the metropolises with Blog. And finally, blog can improve the communication with our friends. Dozens of people who are far away from their hometown not only show their love, joy, but also display their hate, fear, and grief and so on in the blog. Subsequently, our friends can read the Blog and get to know how about us. Then why has blog evolved into all the fashion in more recent times? To begin with, blog has become a bridge to facilitate communications with people in various countries. For instance, people, no matter man or women, young or old, can get the latest coverage of World Expo 2010 by having access to the official blog. Furthermore, the blog has shortened the distance between rural areas and cities. People, especially the youngsters living in the rural countryside can easily share with city-dwellers almost all kinds of things that are on vogue in the metropolises. Millions of people who are far away from their hometown can show their love and hate, joy and sorrow by writing in their blogs and people in hometown can feel for them by reading their blogs. Despite few seniors do not interested in the blog. Personally, I think it is a vital companion。Blog is to us what flower is to the gardens. Only with the blog booming, our living of Internet will be more amazing. Although some aged people are not interested in the blog, I still take it as a vital partner of mine. Blogs for us are just the flowers for the gardens. Our online lives could be more amazing with the booming blog industry. |
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