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418783132(金币+1):多多参与~~ 2010-05-28 20:20:27
xuchun007(金币+3):thanks 2010-05-31 20:03:50
I‘sorry , I hope I diidn't miss the deadline. I choosed the second topic.the following is my work. I'll very appreciate any master would point out my fault.
thank you!
Nowdays, government pay more attention about public services such as public health care , education as well as citizens’ housing problems. Some people think the government should enforce its power to improve the people’s livelihood. But other people think the government didn’t obliged to do those benefitless things which may distract its attention to advance the states economy.
I totally do not agree with the second group people and glad to persuade them to change their narrow mind turn to the bright side. There are several advantages in the first advance. First of all, public services such as public health care, education and public housing problems are the basic livelihood issues, the governments should do their best to settle these things, although a large amount of money will spend, for only these problems have a good deal with, the common people can live a easy live or else there might be more unharmony events occurred. Steady is the most important factor to a nation’s development.
Secondly, government pay more attention to the public services also fulfill our national conditions, because our country’s aim is common  well-to-do, authorities do more work for public will effectively reduce the income gap between the poor and the rich. Take myself, for instance, the 2004 fall, when I get my college admission letter, both cheer and sad climate suffused in my house, the reason is simple: the money, my family have no idea collect so large amount of money for me to register. However, the government helped my family and me to get rid of the money awkward, and students in my situations are unnumerable.
Finally, if somebody say this part of money is costless, he must make a big mistake. No matter the government or investor will get the benefits from offer the public services. Such as advertisements and     other programs will help them to make big money.
In a short, concern more attention on public things will have more important good output than ignore them.
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