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dxiaoqing

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[交流] 请教如何将这三句话用从句缩为一句话

The promotion of cleaner production (CP) in high polluting industries is an effective way to control heavy metals pollution for developing countries. However, there are more challenges for these countries to develop an effective environmental policy to make enterprises to invest in CP. Even in developed areas of these countries, pollution transfer is still the main way to control the pollution, which causes more serious environmental contamination.

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goodtimega

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三句话挺好的。一句话太长了。
2楼2010-05-12 19:42:39
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dxiaoqing

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Originally posted by goodtimega at 2010-05-12 19:42:39:
三句话挺好的。一句话太长了。

可是摘要有字数限制 别的都不能删 就这个是背景想删一下 短一些
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goodtimega

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dxiaoqing(金币+2, 翻译EPI+1):谢谢参与 2010-05-13 08:40:15
In addition to an effective control of heavy metals pollution for developing countries, there are more challenges to develop an efficient environmental policy to enocurage investment in cleaner production (CP), and the pollution transfer is still the main route to control the pollution.
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leeking85

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dxiaoqing(金币+8):多谢了 2010-05-13 08:40:28
Comparing pollution transfer that is the main way for developing countries, cleaner production (CP) is less enviromental contamination and is a more effective way to control heavy metals pollution, but more challenging for developing countries to implement.
5楼2010-05-13 06:11:21
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