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[½»Á÷] ¡¾Leisure chat¡¿I will spread all the gold I have,will you read it over? ÒÑÓÐ80È˲ÎÓë

I have been in agonizing pain since you left me . I have written you so much to show how truthful I am and you know that. You killed my ego with your frivolousness and now I am in desparate search of my own soul.  Still, I am haunted by my smallness. Here I am writing this with no aim; maybe I can make myself feel better.  
    So, my friend, forget all the miseries and sail with me, will you?
    If you are stealing tears in the dark, go with me!   
   Even if you know true love is rare, are you still yearning for care?
At last you shattered your promises as well as my dreams...
My friend, will you answer me? Is there a kind of love that is powerful enough to last forever? Will you,my friend,have the courage to swear to your love(r) that you will love him/her forever and keep that sacred promise?

[ Last edited by swenson on 2010-6-7 at 11:02 ]
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xujie_tumu

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very good poem

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very good poem and sincerely feeling
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swenson(½ð±Ò+2):лл²ÎÓë
swenson(½ð±Ò+2): 2010-05-01 22:47
I am so moved.
I hope your friend would see  it.
2Â¥2010-05-01 22:46:20
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swenson(½ð±Ò+2):лл²ÎÓë
I hope your friend could see and read it!
3Â¥2010-05-01 23:04:39
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clgfzzlp1987

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swenson(½ð±Ò+2):лл²ÎÓë
You are so talented!
Cheer up and move on bravely.
4Â¥2010-05-01 23:47:41
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