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gdk199

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[交流] corrosion science 求助technical check内容求助 已有2人参与

前段时间投的corrosion science,今天回了一个要check 的信,内容如下
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1) In its current state, the level of English throughout your manuscript does not meet the journal's desired standard. There are a number of grammatical errors and instances of badly worded/constructed sentences. Please check the manuscript and refine the language carefully.

2) Please ensure that all the keywords provided are selected from the prescribed keyword list: http://www.elsevier.com/wps/find ... tructions#Keywords. In addition, note that each keyword should be accompanied by letters denoting category
请问各位虫友,你们投稿后英语修改幅度大吗,我这个文章投过power sources,后面虽然被一个审稿人给拒了,但是整个过程没有修改英语。现在我看我的文章我怎么感觉没地方改啊,大家分享一下你们英语修改的幅度

这个关键词在里面找后,格式怎么写啊,难道是A:aluminium这样写吗,是写到文章中,还是投稿系统的填写关键词的方框里啊
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wellyy2005

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gdk199(金币+2):谢谢 2010-04-29 13:26
别人说我们语言有问题,一点都不奇怪,呵呵,反而不说会感到奇怪,O(∩_∩)O~
找高手或公司修改一下吧~

keywords只能在一下列表中选择(材料类的选A中的;技术类的选B中的,应该可以混在一起的):
A. TYPES OF MATERIAL

acid solutions
alloy
aluminium
brass
ceramic
ceramic matrix composites
cobalt
concrete
copper
electronic materials
glass
intermetallics
iron
low alloy steel
magnesium
metal coatings
metal matrix composites
mild steel
molten salts
nickel
organic coatings
platinum
polymer
rare earth elements
silver
sputtered films
stainless steel
steel
steel reinforced concrete
stonework
superalloys
tantalum oxide
tin
titanium
zinc
zirconium

B. TECHNIQUES

AES
AFM
AFS (EXAFS & XANES)
cyclic voltammetry
EIS
electrochemical calculation
ellipsometry
EPMA
erosion
galvanostatic
hydrogen permeation
ICP-OES
in-line diffuse reflection spectroscopy
ion implantation
IR spectroscopy
modelling studies
Mössbauer spectroscopy
polarization
potentiostatic
Raman spectroscopy
RBS
RDA/RCE X
scratching electrode
SEM
SIMS
STEM
TEM
thermal cycling
weight loss
XPS
XRD
X-ray diffraction

C. PROPERTIES AND PHENOMENA

acid corrosion
acid inhibition
alkaline corrosion
amorphous structures
anodic dissolution
anodic films
atmospheric corrosion
carburization
cathodic protection
chlorination
corrosion fatigue
crevice corrosion
de-alloying
effects of strain
electrodeposited films
exfoliation corrosion
fretting corrosion
hardening
high temperature corrosion
hot corrosion
hydrogen absorption
hydrogen embrittlement
hydrogen overpotential
hydrogen permeation
inclusion
interfaces
intergranular corrosion
internal oxidation
kinetic parameters
LME
microbiological corrosion
negative difference effect
neutral inhibition
oxidation
oxide coatings
oxygen reduction
paint coatings
passive films
passivity
pitting corrosion
polymer coatings
potential parameters
Pourbaix diagram
reactor conditions
repassivation
rust
segregation
selective oxidation
stress corrosion
sulphidation
sulphide cracking
thermodynamic diagrams
transpassivity
welding
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gdk199

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Originally posted by wellyy2005 at 2010-04-29 10:02:47:
别人说我们语言有问题,一点都不奇怪,呵呵,反而不说会感到奇怪,O(∩_∩)O~
找高手或公司修改一下吧~

keywords只能在一下列表中选择(材料类的选A中的;技术类的选B中的,应该可以混在一起的):
A. TYPES ...

我知道这些,那个关键字在文章里就这么写
A: **** B:*****,我是要你告诉我怎么个写法,还有在投稿系统里面也这么写吗
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gdk199(金币+1): 2010-10-26 12:23:25
gdk199(金币+7): 2010-10-26 12:23:58
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