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开发出新技术处理7-ADCA生产中产生的固废，并推向生产，提高了经济效益，降低了环保压力。

New technique was development to treatment solid waster from produce 7-ADCA, the new technique not only improve economic benefit ,but also reduce the pressure from environmental protection .

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New technique was development to treatment solid waster from produce 7-ADCA. Not only improve the new technique economic benefit, but also reduce the pressure from environmental protection.
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sima022225(外语EPI+1):well done 2010-04-23 11:11
masterli(金币+1):不错，改了个动词 2010-04-23 11:37
New technique was developed to treat solid waster from produce 7-ADCA. Not only improve the economic benefit, but also reduce the pressure from environmental protection.

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sima022225(外语EPI+1):Thanks~ 2010-04-23 11:12
masterli(金币+2):不好意思，不好意思，我看见绿字，以为我评过分了，本来你的翻译只能得1BB，加一个作为利息，算是赔罪了 2010-04-24 07:58
New technique was developed to treat solid waster from produce 7-ADCA, improved economic benefit, and reduced the pressure from environment.
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masterli(金币+1):好，加入了工业化 2010-04-23 11:59
New technique was developed to deal with solid waster from producing 7-ADCA and putted into produce.Not only improve economic benefit ,but also reduce environmental pressures .
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最是那一低头的温柔，象一朵水莲花不胜凉风的娇羞......
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masterli(金币+1):有争议，有进步 2010-04-23 12:31
New technique was developed to deal with solid waster from producing 7-ADCA and putted into manufacture.Not only improve economic benefits ,but also reduce environmental pressure.

生产的名词一般使用manufacture吧
压力pressure是不可数名词
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masterli

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其实在这里“生产：应该采用industrialization（工业化）更加合适
Kenny_313  
你说得也很不错
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masterli(金币+3):可以加精了，写得很好 2010-04-23 13:21
ysm56789(外语EPI+1):nice 2010-04-23 18:35
masterli(金币+1):为你的才华和谦逊，最后1个归你了 2010-04-24 10:00
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Originally posted by masterli at 2010-04-23 10:23:24:
开发出新技术处理7-ADCA生产中产生的固废，并推向生产，提高了经济效益，降低了环保压力。

New technique was development to treatment solid waster from produce 7-ADCA, the new technique not only impro ...

technique为可数名词，因此须添上不定冠词a

development错误太明显了，改为动词被动式developed

treatment改为treat
后面的错误也很大

直接给个参考吧
A new technique was developed to treat solid waste from 7-ADCA production. Application of the technique in industrial production proves it to be more cost-effective and environmentally friendly than conventional methods.


粗体部分不太确定。
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masterli(金币+1):捧场费1BB 2010-04-24 07:51
A new technique was developed to treat solid waste from the process of 7-ADCA production and pushed to industrialization.It not only enhanced the economic benefits, but also reduced the pressure from environment.
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