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taixixiansheng

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[交流] 这样的cover letter 怎么写?已有2人参与

投的时候,文章语言和格式有好多毛病,没评审就拒了,预编给了修改意见让重投 回信如下:(给个模板最好)

Your manuscript has been screened for possible publication in Colloids and Surfaces B: Biointerfaces. We regret to inform you that we cannot admit the manuscript into the formal review process in its current state. Before we can send your manuscript to the Journal Editor, please make changes/corrections as mentioned in the comments below.

You are welcome to resubmit your paper as a new submission after a very careful revision, making sure that every aspect of the manuscript is in accordance with the author guidelines. This should include, but not be limited to, the comments mentioned below.

We strongly recommend you to consult our journal instructions at http://www.elsevier.com

Sincerely,

Pre-Review Editor
Colloids and Surfaces B: Biointerfaces

Comments:

1) The English is not clear and concise. There are many instances of badly constructed sentences. E.g."In contrast, to decrease the pH to 2.0, the LCST could be decrease to 33?C. T", "However, the P(NIPAm) block as the temperature-responsive micelles outer shell is easy becomes hydrophobic at physiological temperature, which could result in the copolymer precipitation and reduce their biocompatibility in the circulation", "By randomly introducing a small proportion of AA into NIPAm copolymers result in the LCST of the copolymers was sensitive to pH", "The total concentration of monomers was control at 1.77 mmol/mL and the ratio of NIPAm and AA was changed to prepared different samples", "The mPEGP-b-PNA4 with a LCST (at pH 5.5) round 38.5?C was used block copolymerization with MMA, the block copolymers self-assemble into micelles in aqueous solution", " The results indicate that the temperature-sensitive of P(NIPAm-co-AA) was inactive", "Decreasing pH to 5.5, the LCST of the
micelles decreased to 37.5?C (Figure 5) ". Please check your manuscript thoroughly and carefully to refine the language.

2) 5 Keywords should be provided within the manuscript.

3) Please note that the reference list must conform strictly to the Guide for Authors. Author names should be given as initials followed by surname in the reference list.

4) Each table should be provided on a separate page.

5) All the figures provided should be cited sequentially in the text.

6) References should be cited sequentially in the text. Reference 34 and 15 are cited after reference 21.

7) All figures put at the end of the manuscript should be labeled, eg., as Figure 1, Figure 2, etc.
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taixixiansheng(金币+2): 2010-04-19 14:29
用原来的就行了,你是技术审查没有过
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taixixiansheng(金币+1): 2010-04-19 14:29
taixixiansheng(金币+5): 2010-08-17 07:07:46
模板,后面的一条一条回答就可以了
Dear editor,
Thank you for your useful comments and suggestions on the language and the structure of our manuscript. We have modified the manuscript accordingly, and the detailed corrections are listed below point by point:
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