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The energy spectrums for Au are calculated first, and compare it to that of Cu. The results show that the energy spectrum of Au resembles to that of Cu.

这是我的原句
希望虫友们能帮我把句子改通顺点。以为原句中有两个"to that of" 读过去很是拗口!

我后来又改了改
The energy spectrums for Au are calculated first, and compare it to that of Cu. The results show that the Au and Cu share the similar energy spectrum.

这句,好像可以
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The energy spectrum for Au is calculated first and then compared to that of Cu. The results show that Au and Cu share the similar energy spectrum.
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2楼2010-04-07 23:28:54
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rain841230

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oytxtu(金币+10, 翻译EPI+1):谢谢你 2010-04-08 08:38
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Originally posted by 非比寻常 at 2010-04-07 16:28:54:
The energy spectrum for Au is calculated first and then compared to that of Cu. The results show that Au and Cu share the similar energy spectrum.

先修正一下:
The energy spectrum of Au is firstly calculated and then compared with that of Cu. The result shows that Au and Cu share a similar energy spectrum.
然后是我的翻译:
The comparision of the calculated energy spectrum for Au with that of Cu indicates that they both take on very similar energy spectra.
3楼2010-04-08 00:05:26
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有几个小语法问题:spectrum的复数是spectra,应该跟of而不是for

The energy spectra of Au were calculated and compared with that of Cu. The results illustrated similar spectra pattern.
4楼2010-04-08 05:47:07
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