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heqingyuan

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Manuscript ID ABBS-2010-069 entitled "Start Codon Region-related Polymorphism(SCRP): A Novel DNA Marker Technique for Assessing Genetic Diversity in Alfalfa Germplasm Collections" which you submitted to Acta Biochimica et Biophysica Sinica, has been reviewed.  The comments of the reviewer(s) are included at the bottom of this letter.

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Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:

Reviewer: 1
Comments to the Author
This is an interesting methodology paper describing a technique called started codon region-related polymorphism which allows identifying molecular markers by PCR and aimed in the gene start codon regions. However, this MS needs to be thoroughly revised because there are a lot of formatting mistakes:  spaces are lacking, check for uppercases, check for the spelling (southern blot instead of southern bolt for example), some sentences are not finished or bad edited (see below for more detail), the bibliography is not standardized (sometimes you wrote the names and surnames, sometimes the name was abbreviated). Please refer to the guide for authors to write this section in the proper form.

The discussion should be re-written as in some paragraph, you just repeated what you already mentioned in the M&M section and did not emphasizes the originality of your work.

Detailed comments.
Introduction:
-Paragraph 3 (P2 L21): the last sentence should be rephrased as it seems to be edited but not finished.

Materials and Methods
-I would appreciate more details about how the dendrogram was constructed. Was it based only on the presence or the absence of bands? Did you sequence the bands? How did you check when you used the same forward primer with two different reverse primers, if you did not amplify the same allelic variation? In this case your two set of primers would give you two bands of different length that you would consider as two variations but in fact would correspond to the same marker. Maybe among your 175 bands obtained from your PCR amplification, some of them are redundant and would interfere in the validity of your dendrogram.

Results:
-I would like you to explain why you defined the similarity coefficient 0.733 as a threshold to create the five sub-cluster described in your work.
-The very last sentence (P3 L57-58) should not be placed here as it is a discussion about a result obtained.

Discussion:
-Have the authors an idea on how many expressed sequences are touched by their technique compared to the 60% touched by the SRAP?
-The paragraph “primer design” seems to be useless since most information found here were already written in the materials and methods section and just described how the primers were chosen.
-Paragraph reproducibility : Why you did not include in your work your experiment with the soybean instead of just mentioning a result in the discussion?
-Paragraph advantages of SCRP (P5 L12): the penultimate sentence is not finished or bad edited.
References
-Needs to be correctly formatted (spacing, spelling, formatting)

Table 3: what do you mean by "Total No. of polymorphic” in the second column? Would you mean this the total number of bands you included in your study? If this is the case, please correct the denomination of that column.

Figure 1: You mentioned in table 3 that you obtained 10 bands among which 2 were polymorphic. I would appreciate to see arrows or anything else to highlight this point.


Reviewer: 2
Comments to the Author
Theoritically the SCRP seems to be interesting, but the methodology and results presented in the article do not prove that SCRP can be used as a molecular marker for diversity and QTL analysis (as mentioned in the paper).

A molecular maker technique should:
-reveal clearly distinguishable banding pattern,
-the observed banding pattern should be reproducible
-inheritable in subsequent generations.

The gel photograph failed to prove/support the first property and no gel photograph has been presented to support the 2nd property. No experiments have been conducted to prove that the observed banding patterns are heritable.

The manuscript is very poorly written…lots of spelling mistakes.
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非常有希望啊!加油啊! 改改就是了。
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估计录不了了,除非你好好再修改一下!
The manuscript is “very poorly” written…lots of spelling mistakes
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这个report够长的了,问题很多呀,不是那么好搞定,不过既然编辑让你修改重投,还是有希望的。但必须按照referee的建议一个一个的修改到位,还有写作必须提高很多才行。如果人家看你写的东西很累,甚至看不懂你写的英语,那会很糟糕的

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英语写作太差了,建议你好好修改
也当是练习自己的写作
努力改吧
一定有收获的
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