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swenson

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[交流] 【Leisure chat】Trilogy of Love and Lost

1        Love

      To show my amorous love, I shot my cupid arrow.

For your ardent love,my world shines like the rainbow.

I hence carefully select the words to laud your grace.

No words can be found but a gentle touch in your face.



With you, I go, I come, I travel with overwhelming delight.

I try to keep my eyes open just to keep you in my sight.

   In the daylight, I deem every failure as a good start.

       In the dark, I cuddle thee with my  gentle heart.



Please open your heart and unload your pack to stay.

     Love is the soul and heart but no words can say.



                      2        Lost

Can the seed of our innocent love ever fructify?

   Left Nothing but a truthful heart can justify.

You stole my heart and suddenly went away.

   Tears in my eyes, I beseech you to stay.



Out of balance, my heart throbs with trepidation.

My poem lost its cadence with no destination.

My mood soon becomes as dead as a puddle.

With all you left, in the dark, I with fear huddle.



To feel myself alive, I bathe in the fierce rain

Wonder how can I mitigate my suffocating pain...



                  3.     Love and lost

Should I write our love story into an elegy?

Should I define our love story as a tragegy?

No,no! What took place will be eternal.

The pain and the break is just temporal.



    To my fiery love, you wiggle and jiggle.

In your dazzling grace,I begin to straggle.

To my ardent heart, thou feel trouble laden.

If I can, I will love and protect you as a maiden.



       I will choose to be with you at all cost

Even my life is surrounded by love and lost.
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Originally posted by hkkotw at 2010-04-05 21:28:19:

thank you for reading this!
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tianyaren8078(金币+1):GOOD 2010-04-06 10:46
Such a beautiful article~~~
From this article, I could deeply understand what is love in your eye.   
I will choose to be with you at all cost.Even my life is surrounded by love and lost
Wish you could find your true love and keep this love forever..
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that is very good!
多少事,从来急;天地转,光阴迫。一万年太久,只争朝夕。一万年太久,只争朝夕!
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