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ysm56789(金币+5):very nice work, hope to see you in following weekly activity 2010-04-02 16:15
Well, I just got this notice from the “water-pool”sector in the forum. With the first sight of the picture, actually I am a little shocked while I saw the last photo. Not referred to the profound meaning of the picture, it would be a funny cartoon to release myself after the busy morning emerging myself in numerous literatures.

    I am astonished and feel a little disappointed about our government. Maybe we cannot attribute all the causes to the plan and policy of the government from the central and others in all levels. The public, including me, however still insist on criticizing the whole strategy made by the central government. Student, whether you are a undergraduate, graduate or doctor, cannot isolate himself/herself from the society for the whole life long. So few things are as likely to make students exciting as that concerning the job. The student in the picture is not blameful if we take into account that the issue is the product of the complicated social problems concerning the huge population, economical crisis and something else.

    All the people who saw the picture may get into deep thought about how to deal with the issue. I recommend the suggestions below from the aspect of our students. First and foremost, we should keep one thing in our mind that the competent that we got in the university is the basic and simultaneously, the most important ability to complete in the future career with others. What’s more, don’t  indulge yourself in the games which cannot benefit yourself, time is precious in the university and do not comfort yourself that you can make up next day. Do it now and do it better. Last but not least, do not disparage the job that seems no-decent and simplistic, it is the first step that you walk into the society but not the only opportunity you can get in the future life.

   Well in the last paragraph, I should give my deep thanks to the opportunity offered by this English sector and the president ysm56789. And I am deeply grateful to those guys who will give modifications and recommendations to this essay.


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ysm56789(金币+2):you are right 2010-03-28 12:58
I found most of the people don't wear clothes, so funny.
It is not what you want in this world, but what you get; and you do get what you want if you know what you want and want the right things.
2楼2010-03-28 08:41:09
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ysm56789(金币+2):nice comment 2010-03-28 12:59
I also smelled the taste of the injustice of the society.
We do a lot of surface work which is uselless but can't be avoided.
What a terrible and boring thing it is!
It is not what you want in this world, but what you get; and you do get what you want if you know what you want and want the right things.
3楼2010-03-28 08:46:59
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ysm56789(金币+1):thanks 2010-03-29 04:11
well,just support
觉得一旦认定了的东西如果被轻易改变就没有了当初的意义即使丢弃了也不一定会是消失的样子所以选择执念
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