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文人向国外期刊投稿,后审稿人提出了几个问题,请高手朋友帮忙校对一下我的回复,为了便于您的校对我附上了审稿人的问题。

1. Response to comment: In fact, do you believe that a process that needs of so high voltages to operate, with the related risks and needed security measures, can have true industrial applications?

Response: 我们认为在采用该实验装置安全可以确保,只要将装置外部接地,操作者就不会有触电的危险,所以可以用于工业生产。
We believe it is security to adopt the experimental device,  the operator would be no risk of electric shock as long as the exterior of the device was join to ground, so it can be used for industrial production.

2.Response to comment: Energy Consumption: Results are not general but only indicative. They depend of the size and other characteristics of both drying equipment, and can be very different under true industrial processing conditions.

Response:我们认为审稿人认为能耗与两种干燥装置的尺寸和相关特征是对的,为了减小这种影响,我们设计的EHD干燥装置尺寸与Oven基本相同,同时在进行干燥对比实验时,采用了相同的干燥面积,
It is really true as the Reviewer suggested that Energy Consumption depend of the size and other characteristics of both drying equipment. In order to reduce this impact, we design the EHD drying equipmentwhich was made basically the Oven size , meanwhile  the drying experiments were operated in the same drying area,
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rektor2008

WHQ197(金币+12): 2010-03-24 10:48
1.We believe it is safe to use the experimental device.As long as the exterior of the device was joined to ground,  the operator would be free of the risk of electric shock. So it can be applied in the industrial production.
It is really true as the Reviewer pointed out  that Energy Consumption depends on the size and other characteristics of both drying equipments. In order to reduce this impact, we designed a EHD drying equipment which was made basically same as Oven. Meanwhile,  the drying experiments were operated in the same drying area.
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lizzie_su

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WHQ197(金币+4): 2010-03-24 10:48
The risk of electric shock is quite limited. The safty is well-guartanteed as long as the exterior of the device was join to ground.  Therefore,  it can be appled to industrial production .
楼主,感觉老外的意思是,理论上,楼主的东西没有问题,能够运作起来,但是鉴于工作电压太高,需要防护措施比较繁琐,所以在工业上的用途有限。工业不仅是要能运作,最重要的是能够赚钱啊。楼主得找个简单又不费钱还肯定能保证安全的实施啊。如果楼主觉得接地就足够了,要重点强调下怎么个安全法

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