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norlon226

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[交流] 翻译求助,谢谢!

请帮忙翻译一段摘要,谢谢!如果能够不吝指出下面翻译的不足,就更好了。

基因扩增仪是应用于生化分析中一种十分重要的关键仪器。本系统由ARM开发板、7寸带触摸屏LCD液晶屏、温度传感器、调理模块、半导体制冷片、驱动模模块等组成。系统采用WINCE实时操作系统,用Platform Builder 5.0及Embedded Visual C++作为软件开发平台,控制算法采用时间最优PID控制,开发出完全抢占式的嵌入式系统。本系统具有无污染、无噪音,寿命长、界面友好、性能可靠、响应速度快、硬件可剪裁、软件可扩展等特点。

The PCR instrument is very important in biochemical analysis. This system is consisted of ARM development board, 7’lcd touch screen, temperature sensor, conditioning module, semiconductor chilling plate and driver module. It’s a fully preemptive real time embedded system which was developed based on WinCE RTOS, Platform Builder 5.0 & Embedded Visual C++ software development platform, and time optimal PID theory. The system has features such as non-pollution, non-noise, long-life, user-friendly, reliable-performance, fast-response, hardware-tailorable and software-extensible.
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iamweipu

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sirljz(金币+1):谢谢交流 2010-03-20 11:43
同意LS观点~逻辑有些混乱,太多并列的词组读起来会让人有点晕~如果能把那些特点略微展开,分成几组的话应该会好一些~very important 如果换成crucial 或 essential 可能会好一些~仅供参考,呵呵
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3楼2010-03-16 02:17:04
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yalefield

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sirljz(金币+2):谢谢交流 2010-03-20 11:43
随便指点一下吧。

The PCR instrument is very (中国式英语,very太多了)important in biochemical analysis. This system is consisted of ARM development board, 7’lcd touch screen, temperature sensor, conditioning module, semiconductor chilling plate and driver module. It’s a fully preemptive real time embedded system which was developed based on WinCE RTOS, Platform Builder 5.0 & Embedded Visual C++ software development platform, and time optimal PID theory(理论应该先于具体的开发技术和软件). The system has features(has...用法不恰当) such as non-pollution, non-noise, long-life, user-friendly, reliable-performance, fast-response, hardware-tailorable and software-extensible(这些点,应该按照一定的内在逻辑,重新排序。如从外观到内部,从性能到速度......).

还有几个专业词汇,不“专业”。
2楼2010-03-15 23:35:30
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norlon226

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谢谢!再改了一下,请指正。。。

The PCR instrument is crucial in biochemical analysis. This system is consisted of ARM development board, 7’’lcd touch screen, temperature sensor, conditioning module, semiconductor chilling plate and driver module. It’s a fully preemptive real time embedded system which was developed based on time optimal PID theory, WinCE RTOS and Platform Builder 5.0 & Embedded Visual C++ software development platform. The system possesses such features: user-friendly, fast-response, reliable-performance, long-life, non-noise, non-pollution, hardware-ailorable and software-extensible.

或者最后一句能不能这样改。
The hardware is tailorable as well as the software is extensible. The system possesses such features: user-friendly, fast-response, reliable-performance, long-life, non-noise, non-pollution。

还有哪些专业词汇不够专业,恳请指出。
4楼2010-03-16 14:45:49
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norlon226

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或者帮忙翻译一下,谢谢!
5楼2010-03-16 19:36:46
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