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peoplezz

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[交流] 一句英语, 求指正

Food, which considering as a reinforcer in the station of hunger, turns to be a neutral stimulus when the hunger is satisfied.

word 总是提示语法错误, 但是自己没看出来错哪了... 望指教.

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phyweiw

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你想想看,food是食物,能进行consider这个动作吗?
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phyweiw(金币+2):我手比你快半秒,呵呵。送个红包,春节好。 2010-02-12 20:31
我觉得应该用被动语态considered,另外整个句子看起来不够简洁,一看就是自己由汉语翻译成的英语
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phyweiw

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peoplezz(金币+6): 2010-02-12 20:20
Food, which is considered as a reinforcer in the station of hunger, turns to be a neutral stimulus when the hunger is satisfied.
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peoplezz

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引用回帖:
Originally posted by peoplezz at 2010-02-12 20:11:59:
Food, which considering as a reinforcer in the station of hunger, turns to be a neutral stimulus when the hunger is satisfied.

word 总是提示语法错误, 但是自己没看出来错哪了... 望指教.

....
改了好几遍turns to be, turns out to, turn to... 完全忽略了从句....
谢谢你啊我面壁思过去了....
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peoplezz

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peoplezz

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引用回帖:
Originally posted by yimi112 at 2010-02-12 20:18:26:
我觉得应该用被动语态considered,另外整个句子看起来不够简洁,一看就是自己由汉语翻译成的英语

批评的是...看来自己翻译完有必要去论文润色公司改一下了...
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xiaoqihu

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引用回帖:
Originally posted by peoplezz at 2010-02-12 20:11:59:
Food, which considering as a reinforcer in the station of hunger, turns to be a neutral stimulus when the hunger is satisfied.

word 总是提示语法错误, 但是自己没看出来错哪了... 望指教.

Food, considered as a reinforcer in the station of hunger, turns to be a neutral stimulus when the hunger is satisfied.

[ Last edited by xiaoqihu on 2010-2-12 at 23:16 ]
不是不追求,而是不强求
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