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题目∶Towards a sustainable residential environment: decision analysis for residential site selection in Jimei based on multi-source data and multi-criteria 摘要 Under the multiple interactions between increasing population, built-up area expansion, and industrialization, areas undergoing rapid urbanization show a feature of high dynamics. The mixture activities and fragmented land-use have resulted in chaos of development, which cause people to come to an agreement that land suitability evaluation is a basis for making land-use decision. In this paper, an evaluation model of multi-criteria residential site suitability was developed to analyse the suitable area for inhabitation under a GIS platform. Health of residents, convenience of travel and amenity of living are all considered in representation of a health, convenience and amenity sub-model system. The evaluation of the patches adjacent to built-up areas are considered more reliable and the construction in these regions is more cheaper due to the share of publish facilities. The evaluation result in Jimei District showed that areas adjacent to Xinglinwan Bay, near to built-up regions and far away from industrial estates, were the most suitable sites. Meanwhile, the analysis was suggested to be performed regularly in rapidly developing region to ensure the validity of evaluation and continuity of suitability. Key words: multi-criteria decision, residential site suitability, urbanization, Xiamen, China |
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analysis for 应该用of 吧？正文我提了一下意见，你看对不对 Under the multiple interactions among(between用于两者间吧) increasing population, built-up area expansion, and industrialization, areas undergoing rapid urbanization show（showing,不能有两个谓语） a feature of high dynamics. The mixture activities and fragmented land-use have resulted in chaos of development, which cause（causes,表示这个现象引起吧？） people to come to an agreement that land suitability evaluation is a basis（the basisi）for making land-use decision. In this paper, an evaluation model of multi-criteria residential site suitability was developed(designed) to analyse the suitable area for inhabitation under a GIS platform（应该用on,不是under吧？）. Health of residents, convenience of travel and amenity of living are all considered in representation of a health, convenience and amenity sub-model system. The evaluation of the patches adjacent to built-up areas are（is） considered more reliable and the construction in these regions is(will be ) more cheaper due to the share of publish facilities. The evaluation result(+s) in Jimei District showed that areas adjacent to Xinglinwan Bay, near to built-up regions and far away from industrial estates, were the most suitable sites. Meanwhile, the analysis was suggested to be performed regularly in rapidly developing region to ensure the validity of evaluation and continuity of suitability. 因为不知道你想说什么，不好改，下次你可以把中文照版放上来。还有就是，你的时态一会是现在时，一会是过去时，是故意的吗？ |
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一点建议： 1. 第二句which指代不明2.第五句are 应改为is,因为主语是the evaluation. more cheaper应为much cheaper, publish应为public.3. 第六句 “The evaluation result in Jimei District showed that” 不懂，是要说“从Jimei 地区的评估结果来看”？ 那把in改成of 如何。另外and 前应加逗号，即...regions, and far away... 4.第三句后面的health, convenience and amenity 应该用形容词，修饰system，改成healthy, convenient and comfortable sub-model system. 就想到这些，都是些细节，呵呵，专业不同内容上就帮不上忙了 |
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