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kaluoyi2008

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[交流] 请大家看这句英文写作是否表达正确

It may be argued that the covalent interaction between H and metal clusters is enhanced as the gold content increasing, thus bring larger binding energies.

有没有什么语法错误呢,呵呵拿不太准

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shirongjiu

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Originally posted by kaluoyi2008 at 2010-01-28 14:12:00:
It may be argued that the covalent interaction between H and metal clusters is enhanced as the gold content increasing, thus bring larger binding energies.

有没有什么语法错误呢,呵呵拿不太准

It may be argued that the covalent interaction between H and metal clusters is enhanced as the gold content increases, thus bringing larger binding energies.
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allan19821123

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kaluoyi2008(金币+2):xiexie le ! 2010-01-29 14:28
It may be argued that the covalent interaction between H and metal clusters is enhanced as the gold content increasing, thus bring larger binding energies.

改成:It may be argued that the covalent interaction between H and metal clusters could be enhanced as the gold concentration increases, bringing larger binding energy.

前半句没得问题,is enhanced 改成could be enhanced较妥,因为你前面已经说是有争议了。。。。
bringing larger binding energy.作为结果状语从句,OK啦,energy还是用单数吧
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ysm56789

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我认为这样更好一点:
There is an argument that the binding energy was increased because the increasing gold content could enhance the covalent interaction between H and metal cluster.
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4楼2010-01-29 17:19:07
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phyweiw

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kaluoyi2008(金币+2):thanks~ 2010-01-30 00:11
Try this one

It may be arguable that the covalent interaction between H and metal clusters is enhanced with increasing gold content, leading to higher binding energy.
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