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[交流] 请指正----用英语简要介绍济南

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儿子今年上小学一年级，学校要求他在1-2分钟时间，用英语简要介绍一个济南。本人写的初稿如下，请网友批正。先谢谢了！

Good afternoon, everyone.
I am XXX, seven years old, and study in the primary school. Now, I am glad to introduce Jinnan to you.
Jinan is my hometown. It is also named as the Spring City, which is due to so many springs, like the Baotu Spring, Heihu Spring and Baimai Spring. Furthermore, The Baotu Spring, Thousand Buddha Mountain and Daming Lake have become scenic spots of Jinan.
Jinan is a beautiful city, and people in Jinan are very passional. People all over the world are welcomed to visit Jinan.

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