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Electrochromic materials have been recognized as one kind of acknowledged prospective intelligence materials during the past decades. In recent years, the electrochromic materials have attracted a great deal of attention due to their excellent potential applications in a wide range of technological areas, such as smart windows, aircrafts, sunroofs, rear-view mirrors, and certain types of electronic displays. Among the electrochromic materials, TiO2 is one of the most extensively studied oxides attribute to its low cost, high coloring efficiency, high mechanical properties, good electrochemical stability and long cycle durability 。
Recently, to investigate the electrochromic properties of TiO2 coating, Many research groups have fabricated TiO2 coatings by various physicochemical methods, including sputtering [7], evaporation deposition [8], chemical solution deposition [9] and sol–gel method [10,11]. However, only very thin and small area coatings could be produced in these ways. Besides, these methods present a weak adherence of the coatings to the substrates and require long processing time.

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doudounba(金币+30,VIP+0): 1-4 15:19
楼主写得很好,我看就两个地方要改一下:
(1)TiO2 is one of the most extensively studied oxides attribute to its low cost, high coloring ........
把attribute改成due
(2) as one kind of acknowledged prospective intelligence
在acknowledge前加个定冠词the
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