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ll921

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Single crystal samples with well-defined crystallographic orientations can help to understand these materials with the goal of improving their selectivity. However, properties of Tto were investigated only on polycrystalline samples in previous studies. To our best knowledge, there is only one paper reports that the Tto single crystal has been grown by Bridgman method. However, the quality is poor for a high-dislocation density and an impurity is inevitable introduced from the Pt crucible. Furthermore, the grown tto single crystal was mainly used as a substance and there is no data care about the character of Tto has been reported in the paper. While floating zone method is more suitable for growing Tto single crystal for it is crucible-free, a steep temperature gradient along the vertical direction and atmosphere-controllable.
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zap65535(金币+18,VIP+0): 1-6 01:11
1)第三句:there is only one paper reports that ....reports 不对。应该改为there is only one paper which has  reported that ...简单说就是there is only one paper reported that ...(过去分词作定语)
2)however用的有点多,看着改一个。可用的较为恰当的相应的词有whereas 、nevertheless、but.
3)第五句:there is no data care about ...care about 应改为caring  about 或showing\which(that)shows\which(that)cares about...
4)第五句:  the character of Tto has been reported in the paper...在 the character of Tto 后加 that \which
5)最后一句话while用的有点怪。
供参考。
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ll921

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再帮我看看 时态有没有问题呗
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商讨一下

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Originally posted by Tina9201 at 2009-12-31 10:40:46:
1)第三句:there is only one paper reports that ....reports 不对。应该改为there is only one paper which has  reported that ...简单说就是there is only one paper reported that ...(过去分词作定语)
2) ...

1)点中前面的说法是对的。但简单说就是there is only one paper reported that...,我觉得值得推敲。这里reported是过去分词作paper的定语,但在语法意义上,paper是reported的宾语,在这里它不能再接一个that引出的宾语从句。如果一定要用这种形式,那应该是:there is only one paper reporting that...,用现在分词就不错了。
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