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hf6391964

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[交流] 翻译一段读后感

最近读了安利宝贝的《素年锦时》，关于童年以及童年所在的那个村庄的记忆如海浪般一潮一潮不断袭来，直抵心底也湿了眼眶……

对很多人来说，安妮宝贝式的忧郁、安妮宝贝式的沉默、安妮宝贝式的麻布长裙，似乎就是许多年轻人自己心目中的“另一面”。但读着安妮宝贝的《素年锦时》，我发现这个原本暴躁、叛逆、经常“陷入”绝望的女孩，现在少了些许浮躁和决绝，不再是宿命和漂泊的，而是宁静的、平和的。

  《素年锦时》属散文一类文字，作者采用一种“清谈”的方式来书写，字字句句，所思所想，多为有感而发的心情之语。那清素岁月的情感，那锦绣时分的清谈，给人一种“时光流转”般的沉静感觉。 全书分春夏秋冬四季，冬的部分，如同一段比较安静的时间，来谈论身世、家庭、童年，回忆中消失的南方、流失、生命的客观性……剥离回忆的黑暗和光亮之处，很容易引起读者的共鸣，现在的....,儿时的记忆，家乡的记忆如潮般浮现在我脑海，湿了眼眶更不想长大。小说里出现的婚姻和孩子，是一条水流。这是我们每一个人的生活里都会面对的内容。它们与亲情、生命一样，都是为了融汇大海之中的支流，安妮宝贝细腻地描绘了一个女子面对婚姻和孩子的选择与态度，虽说是一篇关于婚姻主题的小说，但本质上更接近一个童话。孩子的意象多次在小说中出现，它讲述成人的故事，属于孩子的心。为此，作者对这个故事的描写显出箫声婉转的意境，文字缓慢悠扬，让爱情在她笔下绽开，如一朵朴素的花儿，却又有着别样的芳香。随笔集中散文与小说并存，小说很像散文，散文又像小说。安妮宝贝在随笔集中写道，“如果写作是一种治疗，这种治疗充满矛盾。一边自我控制一边反复刺激病灶。一个人写完第一本书的时候，不会畏惧。越写越多之后，畏惧开始出现，如同跋涉到临渊深谷，看到前面漫漫长途，巍峨峰顶，不知边界何在。”安妮宝贝表示，以前她从未这样客观而平淡地谈论过一些真实的人与事，包括身世、童年、南方、世相等等，这本书更像一次清谈，是一个人在对自己说话。
    素年，是看尽繁华过后的落定吧。一个人走了太远的路，品尝了太多的孤独，残酷的青春慢慢凋谢，于是便不会再如从前尖锐，曾经的尖锐是把闪着寒光的刀子，割伤过身体割伤过心，让人在某个瞬间衰老。如安所说，衰老是一瞬间又一瞬间造成的，而不是一个渐进的过程。在这个高喊着“青春是用来挥霍的”的年代，保持清醒是件困难的事情，尽管清醒很痛，可我想，安是一直清醒的。这本书中的文字，一如既往的清醒，只是少了从前那种冷漠直白。是否在看过太多的风景后，曾经所有的伤口慢慢愈合，于是心底一片澄明？呵，不论是不是，至少在这本书已能感受得一丝温暖，而如此温暖在从前的书中是找不到的。  

锦时，对于安来说，锦时究竟是过往的冷静孤寂还是如今的洗练淡泊呢？其实，不论是何种，那都是一道风景与一种阅历。  

晚上，一个人读着安的文字，觉得很舒服。呵，更喜欢安现在的风格，因为害怕满屋子窒息的空气。少了许些阴暗，多了些淡泊，这样的安，更成熟了，更贴近人生，走近生命的本质了，不是吗？  

在当今这物欲横流，现实的社会里，当你在阅读完这一本书后，相信你能体味到她所描述的云淡风轻，真实自然。

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这回，不论是 高手、达人、还是专家 都爱莫能助了
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hf6391964(金币+10,VIP+0):谢谢 感谢你这好像是翻译软件翻的 12-16 14:25
zap65535(金币-5,VIP+0): 12-23 22:57
自己润色一下：
Amway has recently read the baby's "Su Jin years time", with regard to childhood and the childhood memories of the village where the waves like a tidal wave as a constant hit, reaching as far bottom of my heart has wet eyes ... ...



For many people, Baby Anne-style depression, Baby Anne-style silence, Anne-style linen baby dress, it seems that many young people in their own mind, "the other side." But reading Annie Baby's "Su-Kam-year time", I found the original hot-tempered, rebellious, often "trapped in a" desperate girl, is now less showtime Xu impetuous and decisive and is no longer a fate and adrift, but quiet, and peaceful.



  "Su Jin years time" is a class of prose writing, the author uses a "talking shop" approach to writing, every word, are thinking more of what has feelings for the language. That Qing Su-years of emotion, and that beautiful hours of talk, giving a "time flow"-like sense of calm. The book four seasons winter part, as a relatively quiet time to talk about life experience, family, childhood, memories disappear south, the loss of life, memories of objectivity ... ... stripped of the Department of darkness and light, it is easy to arouse the reader's sympathy, now ...., childhood memories, memories of home-like surface waves in my mind, wet eyes do not want to grow up. The novel of marriage and children there is a flow. This is our life of every individual will be faced with content. Them with affection, life, are both tributaries in order to integrate into the sea, Anne Baby delicate picture of a woman faced with the choice of marriage and children, and attitudes, although the subject is a novel about marriage, but inherently more close to a fairy tale. The child's image appears several times in the novel, it tells the story of adults belonging to the child's heart. To this end, the authors describe the story showing Xiaosheng mellowed mood, words slow and melodious, let love blossom in her pen, such as a simple flower, but has a different kind of aroma. Suibi focus on the coexistence of prose and fiction, novels like prose, prose fiction and butter. Baby Anne concentrated in Suibi wrote, "If the writing is a kind of treatment, such treatment is full of contradictions. While repeatedly stimulating the side of self-control lesions. A person who finished the first book, it does not fear. More to write more later , fear began to appear, as the trek to the Pro-yuan ravine and saw in front of long distance, towering peaks, I do not know what the border. "Baby Anne states that she has never been an objective and dull to talk about some real people and events, including the life experience, childhood, the South, the world around, etc., this book is more like a talk, is a person for what they said.

    Su, is busy looking after the best set of drop-bar. Go too far one way, taste too much loneliness, cruel youth slowly withering, there should be no sharp Another example is the past, once the sharp is to shining Hanguang knife, cut off the body cut-off heart, people aging in a moment. As an earlier, aging is a result of the moment another moment, rather than a gradual process. In this high-shouting "youth is used to big-spending" years to stay sober is a difficult task, though clearly painful, but I think security is always sober. The text in this book, as always sober, but less used to the kind of indifference straightforward. Whether the landscape seen too many after he had been slowly heal all wounds, so deep down, a clarity? Oh, whether it is not, at least in this book has been able to feel the warmth too, but so warm in the previous book to be found.



Jin, when, for an example, Kam Is it cool when the lonely, or being indifferent to today's Xilian do? In fact, no matter what, it is a landscape with a kind of experience.



Night, a person reading an text feel very comfortable. Oh, prefer an existing style, full house for fear of choking air. Xu something less dark, have become more indifferent to such a security, more mature, closer to life, and approached the essence of life, and is not it?



In today's materialistic this, the reality of society, when you finished reading this book, believing that you can savor what she described in clear sky, the real natural.

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自己润色下，真好意思说。

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不太好翻译，有点难度。翻译机器的翻译不能要。
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The year of the characters of essays, using a "talk" way to write, from beginning to end, many thinks, the language of the mood for lacked.brother. The clear element of emotion, the years of fitness at jinxiu district, give a person a kind of "time" calm feeling. Circulation The points of chun xiaqiu winter seasons, winter, as part of a relatively quiet time to talk about life, family, childhood memories, and the south, erosion, the objectivity of the life... The darkness and brightness stripping memory, easy cause readers, now... The memory of childhood, my hometown, a tide of memory in my mind, wet eye more to grow up. In the novels of marriage and children, is a stream. This is the life of every one of us will face in the content. They love, life, and to the tributary, sea together in a delicate -by Anne baby face marriage and children of women's choice and attitude, although it is a story about marriage theme of the novel, but essentially closer to a fairy tale. Many children in the image, it appeared in the novel about the story, belong to the heart of a child. Therefore, the author describes the story of artistic conception, show sound word slowly rising, make love in her works, such as a simple shy of flowers, but have different fragrance. Concentrated prose essays and novel coexist, novels like prose essays, as novel. Annie's baby in the essay focus wrote, "if writing is a kind of treatments that is full of contradictions and self control side stimulated repeatedly lesions. A man finished first book, not afraid, after the writing more. Fear begins to appear, like the deep valley, trudging before long, long to see towering peaks, boundary." Annie's baby says she never before, this objective and flatly talked about some real people and things, including pedigree, childhood, south, common etc, this book is more like a fitness, is a man on his talk.
Meat is busy at all after settling. A man walked far way too lonely, taste, cruel youth, then slowly fade as once again, once the sharp sharp are sheathed with the knife, cut GuoXin cut over the body, let a person in a moment aging. As Ann, aging is instant and instant, rather than a gradual process. In this chanting "youth is used to fritter", keep awake is difficult, though very painful, but I awake, awake, is always. In this book, as usual, is less clear once the cold straightforward. Whether have seen so many scenery, once all the wound healing slowly, so heart a clear? Oh, it is not, at least in the book has a warm feeling to have, but in the book was so warm is found.

Jin, for Ann, jin is calm when passing the lonely or today? Washs practice indifferent Actually, no matter what, it is a kind of scenery and experiences.
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