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晖你莫属

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[交流] 求两遍看图话题作文

一是:小明和小王是同班同学,某次考试,小明考了60分,他爸爸看了后高兴的说,不错,考试及格了。小王考了90分,回去还被他爸爸批评,说才90分,错了10分,请写篇不少于250字的英语作文
二是:在一个公交车上,很多人都坐着,却不给个老人让座,一个小伙子说,这么老了还出来乱走,也不知道呆在家里,他前排的一个很时髦的女的说,这么老了,要出门就打的,不要来挤公交车。请结合图意,写篇不少于250字的英文作文。

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lingbaobei

这个也太多了吧
2楼2009-12-08 20:52:21
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晖你莫属(金币+20,VIP+0):你的答案与我的要求相差甚远,所以不能给你60. 12-13 09:49
Xiao-Ming and Xiao-Wang are classmates. Once up a time there was an examination.  Xiao-Ming got a score of 60 while his father was happy to congratulate him for a successful exam.  Xiao-Ming got a score of 90. However, when he got home his father criticized him by saying 10 points were missing due to the incorrectness, notwithstanding the fact that 90% of the exam is correct.
The moral of this story is that expectations count. Regardless of what is your achievement, it is up to the expectation of the relevant partner to judge the success. This happens everywhere, especially among people of different class, educational background, and perhaps races. The example shown above just demonstrates that it is necessary to understand this crucial aspect in the life and society, and not to rely on the scores of one particular exam. This also demonstrates that the expectation itself has to be seriously considered in the measurement of the success.

(I believe this is worth at least 60 BB --after all, expectation counts!)
3楼2009-12-08 21:22:33
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Originally posted by lingbaobei at 2009-12-8 20:52:
这个也太多了吧

字数太少,而且就一篇。
4楼2009-12-09 17:46:32
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晖你莫属

金虫 (小有名气)

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Originally posted by lingbaobei at 2009-12-8 20:52:
这个也太多了吧

字数太少,而且就一篇。
5楼2009-12-09 17:47:02
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Originally posted by goodtimega at 2009-12-8 21:22:
Xiao-Ming and Xiao-Wang are classmates. Once up a time there was an examination.  Xiao-Ming got a score of 60 while his father was happy to congratulate him for a successful exam.  Xiao-Ming got a  ...

字数太少,而且就一篇。
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Originally posted by goodtimega at 2009-12-8 21:22:
Xiao-Ming and Xiao-Wang are classmates. Once up a time there was an examination.  Xiao-Ming got a score of 60 while his father was happy to congratulate him for a successful exam.  Xiao-Ming got a  ...

我可不可以给你点劳务费,但是不能给你60.可我不知道怎么给?
7楼2009-12-12 21:45:49
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goodtimega

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Originally posted by 晖你莫属 at 2009-12-12 21:45:

我可不可以给你点劳务费,但是不能给你60.可我不知道怎么给?

给金币就行了。多少看着办
发金币是发帖子的一部分。不会的话问一问斑竹
8楼2009-12-12 23:26:15
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晖你莫属(金币+20,VIP+0):太简单 12-19 10:48
An old man got on a bus crowded with  passengers because of rush hours. There wasn't not a vacant seat to be left. Worse still, there seemed  not to be one person willing to stand up for offerring a seat. Instead, a young man said that" they should stay at home rather than go around." a lady dressed fashionally addly that:" people at that old age should take taxi avoiding crowding with the young." But I would like to respond  that everyone will experience old stage, if they become old and meet this condition like this, what they would expect? I think it's respect for them. And to the lady, I would like to say" I am sure that if they are rich enough, they possibly to take a taxi. While the fact is that most old people have not a lot of money, they just depend on their limited retirement pension."
As the youths,I think it's necessary for us to offer seats for those who really need them,such as expectant mothers,disabled people ,old people and so on.
First, it's the behavior of good manners.You are polite enough if you do so.Second,it's the need of social morality.
However,if you can't achieve this, you are probably a definit person.And as a result,you can't be trust in the social activities.
So,let's build a good social order from offering a seats,just from you and me.
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goodtimega

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二是:在一个公交车上,很多人都坐着,却不给个老人让座,一个小伙子说,这么老了还出来乱走,也不知道呆在家里,他前排的一个很时髦的女的说,这么老了,要出门就打的,不要来挤公交车。请结合图意,写篇不少于250字的英文作文

In a crowded bus, a senior citizen could not find a seat . A young boy mentioned that senior citizens should stay at home, while a fashionary girl followed with the comment that senior citizens should travel with taxi.

The public transportation is for everyone, and it is a measure of the society in regard to the respect of senior citizen and women. The story mentioned above simply demonstrates the fact that there is a lot work remained to be done in promoting the standard.

The story also indicates that the young generation has a serious educational problem which can be attributed to the lack of thrust in the educational system.
10楼2009-12-14 07:49:25
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