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[交流] 求英语高手帮修改一下摘要，中译英，非常感谢！

谢绝软件翻译！
把中文摘要翻译成英文，翻译要求：语句标准，规范！
这个摘要对我很重要！请英语高手帮帮忙！

摘要：采用相场方法，模拟了多个空间取向的棒状第二相粒子对基体晶粒长大的影响。结果表明：在晶粒长大过程中，棒状第二相粒子位于晶界处并与晶界方向一致，第二相粒子表现出强烈地钉扎晶界的作用，平均晶粒极限半径可以用Zener关系表示；在第二相粒子面积分数和粒子尺寸分别相同的情况下，当第二相粒子面积分数较小（小于5%）时，棒状粒子与球形粒子对晶粒长大的钉扎作用没有明显差别；当粒子面积分数较大（大于5%）时，棒状粒子钉扎晶界的效果好于球状粒子的钉扎效果。

以下的翻译有很多的毛病，仅供参考，请高手帮修改或重新翻译！谢谢！

Abstract: The phase-field method was employed to simulate the effect of the geometric orientation and shape of second-phase particles to the matrix grain growth. Simulation results show that, in the grain growth process, most of the spherical particles were in the intersection of three crystals, stick particles were at the grain boundaries in the same direction with the grain boundary, and grain showed a strong grain boundary pinning effect and the final average grain radius can be expressed by Zener relations. Under the condition of the same area fraction and particle size, there is no difference between stick particles and spherical particles in the pinning effect on grain growth when the second-phase particles is small(less than 5%) ;on the contrary, stick particles play better when the second-phase particles is large(larger than 5%).

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The phase-field method was employed to simulate the effect of different geometric orientation club-shaped second-phase particles to the matrix grain growth. Simulation results showed that the second-phase particles precipitated along matrix grain boundaries and had same direction with the grian boundary.And at same time the second-phase particles were observed a strong pinning effect to grain boundary. The average grain radius can be expressed by Zener function relationship. In the case of the same second-phase particles area fraction and matrix particle size, no larger difference existed for clup-shaped particles and spherical particles in the pinning effect on matrix grain growth when the second-phase particles area fraction was small(less than 5%) . However club-shaped particles pinning influence to grain boundary could be better than the spherical particles when the area fraction was larger than 5%.
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小兰花(金币+4,VIP+0):多谢指点！你若有空的话，好好帮我修改一下！谢谢！ 10-27 21:58
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the area fraction of the second-phase particles less than 5%
the area fraction of the second-phase particles larger than 5%
play better，perform better
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Abstract: The phase-field method was employed to simulate the effect of the geometric orientation and shape of second-phase particles to the matrix grain growth. Simulation results show that, in the grain growth process, most of the spherical particles were in the intersection of three crystals, whereas stick particles at the grain boundaries were in the same direction with the grain boundary）, moreover, grain (这个grain单数还是复数，单数要加a，如果有指代加the）showed a strong grain boundary pinning effect and the final average grain radius can be expressed by Zener relations.（这句我光看英文觉得有问题，表达不是很好，但我没改） （Under the condition of 这个是不是可以用In condition that代替）the same area fraction and particle size, there is no difference between stick particles and spherical particles in the pinning effect on grain growth when the second-phase particles are small(less than 5%) ;on the contrary, stick particles behave better when the second-phase particles are larger(larger than 5%).（前面用了better后面也要用比较级，否则不一致）

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Abstract: The phase-field method was employed to simulate the effect of the geometric orientation and shape of second-phase particles to the matrix grain growth. Simulation results show that, in the grain growth process, most of the spherical particles are in the intersection of three crystals. Stick particles are at the grain boundaries in the same direction along the grain boundary.  The grain shows a strong pinning effect and the final average grain radius can be expressed by Zener relations. Under the condition of the same area fraction and particle size, there is no difference between stick particles and spherical particles in the pinning effect on grain growth when the second-phase particles is small(less than 5%) . On the contrary, stick particles play an increasingly important role when the second-phase particles is large (larger than 5%).
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