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问题是：Please answer the below question with no more than 150 words in English. Do you feel you have enough time? If not, why you have such feeling? 下面是我的答案： I do have the feeling that I have not enough time. I think the reason may be that the world we lived in has been filled with lots of new knowledge. I am eager to learn all of them but I have not enough time always, which makes me anxious a little. As a student ,I have learn the knowledge in the book for many years, I am eager to play an usefull and indispensable role in the society using the knowledge I have learn in the school. But before that I have to make much more preparations to make me stronger.So I need much more time.Those all make me feel that I have not enough time. 请高手不吝赐教，回答中肯意见采纳的都送金币！谢谢 |
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淡紫色(金币+5,VIP+0):谢谢！多多交流哈1 10-24 23:22
淡紫色(金币+5,VIP+0):谢谢！多多交流哈1 10-24 23:22
| I do have the feeling（I don't feel来的更简洁） that I have not enough time(not应该放在do之后). I think the reason may be that the world we lived（现在式好一些） in has been filled with lots of（我觉得lots of是多余的） new knowledge. I am eager to learn all of them（them指什么？） but I have not enough time always, which makes me anxious a little. As a student ,I have learn（应该为learnt） the knowledge in the book（from books会好些。） for many years, I am eager to play an usefull （应该为a useful）and indispensable role in the society using the knowledge I have learn（应该为learnt） in the school. But before that I have to make much more preparations to make me stronger.So I need much more time.Those all make me feel that I have not enough time. |
3楼2009-10-24 12:27:07
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淡紫色(金币+5,VIP+0):多谢指教 10-24 23:28
淡紫色(金币+5,VIP+0):多谢指教 10-24 23:28
| I don't think that I have enough time. As the world we are living in is being filled with more and more new knowledge. In order to live a better life and play an usefull and indispensable role in the future, I have to make much more preparations to make me stronger. I take any chances to learn everything from books, school, society and other people. It takes me a lot of time. Even I don't have time for relaxation. Those all make me feel that I don't have enough time. |
4楼2009-10-24 14:47:19
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淡紫色(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢你 10-24 23:30
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淡紫色(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢你 10-24 23:30
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I do have the feeling that I have not enough time. --------Well ,time is always not enough for me ! I think the reason may be that the world we lived in has been filled with lots of new knowledge. I am eager to learn all of them but I have not enough time always, which makes me anxious a little. As a student ,I have learn the knowledge in the book for many years, I am eager to play an usefull and indispensable role in the society using the knowledge I have learn in the school. But before that I have to make much more preparations to make me stronger.---------The reason may be that more and more knowledges are filling in our world. As a student, in order to play an useful and indispensable role in the society in the future ,it is necessary for me to learn as much as posssible ,also as deep as posssible. So I need much more time.Those all make me feel that I have not enough time.--------So I need more time.  |
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