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It is worth mention that in a recent theoretical work for electron transport in silicon nanowire, Li et al. find that when the diameter is larger enough, the edge influence can be negligible and a linear diameter dependence of electron conductance is obtained.

句子里面有两个that,有问题?
在不改变意思的前提下,如果能改,希望虫子们不吝赐教!
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oytxtu(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 10-9 16:24
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In a recent theoretical work for the electron transport in silicon nanowire,
Li et al. found that a linear diameter dependence of electron conductance is obtained if the ( ) diameter is larger enough and the edge influence is negligible.

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In a recent theoretical work for the electron transport in silicon nanowire,
Li et al. found that the edge influence  is negligible and  linear diameter dependence of electron conductance is obtained if the ( ) diameter is larger enough.

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oytxtu(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 10-9 16:24
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In a recent theoretical work for electron transport in silicon nanowire, Li et al. found that the edge effects are negligible for nanowires with large enough diameters andthe diameter dependence of electron conductance is linear.
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oytxtu(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 10-9 16:24
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In a recent theoretical work for the electron transport in silicon nanowire, Li et al. reported that there is a linear diameter dependence of electron conductance
, in terms of that the edge influence can be negligible if the diameter is larger enough
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oytxtu(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 10-9 16:24
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oytxtu(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢 10-9 16:29
其实放两个that也不是什么大问题吧,如果想去掉一个的话也可以了。不过那个larger enough好像有点问题,我觉得应该用large enough吧。worth后面好像要跟动名词...
It is worth mentioning that in a recent theoretical work for electron transport in silicon nanowire, Li et al. find the edge influence can be negligible while the diameter is large enough and a linear diameter dependence of electron conductance is obtained.

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