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doudounba

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With decreasing concentration, the number of CS2 molecules located at single β-carotene molecule increases relatively,so intermolecular interaction of β-carotene is weakened. In addition, the large density of CS2 reduces the purturbation of external environment, and the CC bonding of β-carotene is forced evenly, which induces further enhancement degree of structural order of β-carotene molecule. The lower the concentration is, the more rapid the enhancement in induced degree of structural order of β-carotene is. So electronic delocalization is enhanced in β-carotene chain by high degree of structural order of β-carotene[25]. Furthermore, this fact can be proved by two hands. With decreasing concentration, firstly, the UV-visible spectrum of β-carotene in CS2 progressively narrows, and secondly, the depolarization ratio of the CC stretching modes of β-carotene in CS2 becomes large in the Raman spectra. According to D.Yu.Paraschuk and Kobryanskii’s a qualitative nonlinear model of coherent weekly damped electron-lattice vibrations[4], the degree of delocalization of π electron is enhanced, so the density of mobile π electrons between adjacent carbon sites in the β-carotene chain strongly modulates the strength of their covalent bonding giving a high electron-phonon coupling, which results in the peculiar phenomenon that RSCS is extremely high.

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doudounba(金币+1,VIP+0):感谢你对我求助的关心,以前有一段文章您帮改的很好,从你的态度你也很是对小木虫更是关心负责,你的疑问,我已在下面说明! 9-19 14:41
楼主刚求助翻译完这段http://muchong.com/bbs/viewthread.php?tid=1548004&fpage=1
为什么又求助修改,其目的令人怀疑,而且所用小木虫登陆名不同,利用马甲,发表翻译帖子,行为有些争议
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3楼2009-09-17 17:07:08
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pan0827

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是翻译成中文还是修改英文,使之流畅?
2楼2009-09-17 15:31:03
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The number of CS2 molecules located at single β-carotene molecule increases with decrease in concentration, and thus the intermolecular interaction of β-carotene is weakened. In addition, the large density of CS2 prevents the purturbation of external environment, and the CC bonding of β-carotene is forced evenly, which could cause further improvement of structural order of β-carotene molecule. The lower the concentration is, the larger the enhancement is. Therefore, the electronic delocalization is enhanced in β-carotene chain by high degree of structural order of β-carotene[25]. This fact can be proved by two hands. Firstly, with decreasing concentration, the UV-visible spectrum of β-carotene in CS2 progressively becomes narrow. Secondly, the depolarization ratio of the CC stretching modes of β-carotene in CS2 becomes larger in the Raman spectra. According to the previous report by D.Yu.Paraschuk and Kobryanskii, a qualitative nonlinear model of coherent weekly damped electron-lattice vibrations[4], the degree of delocalization of π electron is enhanced, so the density of mobile π electrons between adjacent carbon sites in the β-carotene chain strongly modulates the strength of their covalent bonding giving a high electron-phonon coupling, which results in the peculiar phenomenon that RSCS is extremely high.
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doudounba

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本人想用自己的号让人润色这短话,可以发错成翻译!我的号还没有金币了,所以用朋友的号了。
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