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[求助] 文章初审结束,有评阅人说文章很难读,语句不正式。这种该怎么修改已有5人参与

水利渣试着第一次论文试着投了下OE,评阅结果还行,一共15条意见,不过有一个评阅人说文章很难读,语句不正式,以下是审稿人原文
1. The manuscript is not easy to follow, and a lot of sentences are not formal (e.g., the first paragraph in Section 1). Some parts of the manuscript are very "compact" and "dense" in the descriptions while other parts are more "reasoning" and "story-telling". There should be a better balance or choice between how to express your thoughts and results, please revise.
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