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[交流] 【求助完毕】帮忙润色一段英文（语法、逻辑），满意的话追加金币

Sample TextSample TextFig.3 shows the voltage profiles (2nd cycle) of HBTQ in 1 M LiPF6/EC+DEC electrolyte at a current density of 500 mA g-1. It reveals that HBTQ has a rather flat voltage plateau at about 2.15 V and the curves are relatively sloping in the potential range of 1.6–1.0 V at the 1st cycle, and the 2.15V plateau capacity approximately 44% composes the aggregate capacity, it has an overall uptake capacity of 2.8 Li per unit formula for the HBTQ, whereas the insertion of the 3.2 Li ions occurs at a potential range of 1.0-1.6 V. According to the mechanism of sheme 2, HBTQ has a theoretical capacity of 628 mAh g–1, because discharge voltage reached 1.0V, positive material was inserted by ca. 6.5 Li ions(initial capacity 341 mAh g–1); thus, when discharge voltage was down to 0.1V, all of Li ions was released (scheme 2). An average discharge voltage of 2.8 V and discharge capacity mostly from about 2.8V high-tension plateau after 2nd cycle. These results are highly consistent with the CV analysis.

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Voltage profiles (second cycle) of HBTQ in 1 M LiPF6/EC+DEC electrolyte at a current density of 500 mA g-1 are presented in Fig. 3. It reveals that HBTQ has a rather flat voltage plateau at about 2.15 V, and the curves are relatively sloping in the potential range of 1.6–1.0 V at the first cycle, where the plateau capacity of 2.15V contributes approximately to 44% of the aggregate capacity. The overall uptake capacity for the HBTQ is 2.8 Li per unit formula, and the insertion of the 3.2 Li ions occurs at a potential range of 1.0-1.6 V. According to the mechanism of sheme 2, HBTQ has a theoretical capacity of 628 mAh g–1, due to the fact that discharge voltage had reached 1.0V, and positive material was inserted by ca. 6.5 Li ions (initial capacity 341 mAh g–1). Therefore, when discharge voltage dropped to 0.1V, all Li ions were released (scheme 2). An average discharge voltage of 2.8 V were observed after the second cycle, and discharge capacity was mostly obtained from a high-tension plateau of about 2.8V. These results are highly consistent with the CV analysis.
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From Fig.3 we can easily find a neatly flat plateau at about 2.15 V and a gentle slope in the range of 1.6–1.0 V at the 1st cycle with current density of of 500 mA g-1. The plateau accounts for 44% of the aggregate capacity.
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Shown in Fig.3 are the voltage profiles (2nd cycle) of HBTQ in 1 M LiPF6/EC+DEC electrolyte at a current density of 500 mA g-1. HBTQ has a rather flat voltage plateau at about 2.15 V and the curves are relatively sloping in the potential range of 1.6–1.0 V in the 1st cycle. The corresponding 2.15V plateau capacity composes approximately 44% of the aggregate capacity. It has an overall uptake capacity of 2.8 Li per unit formula for the HBTQ, whereas the insertion of the 3.2 Li ions occurs at a potential range of 1.0-1.6 V. According to the mechanism of sheme 2, HBTQ can have a theoretical capacity of 628 mAh g–1, since 1.0 V of discharge voltage corresponds to positive material inserted by ca. 6.5 Li ions(initial capacity 341 mAh g–1). As a result,  when discharge voltage was down to 0.1V, all of Li ions was released (scheme 2). An average discharge voltage of 2.8 V and discharge capacity arise mostly from about 2.8V high-tension plateau after the 2nd cycle. These results are in accordance with the CV analysis.
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