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[求助] 两个审稿人意见,一个-1分,一个1分,被拒了

两个审稿人意见,一个-1分,一个1分,被拒了,大家帮忙看看需要大改还是重新改写参考文献

1: (weak accept)
In this paper, the authors make a summary of research on causality and its application in medical development. This would be of interests to the readers from medical and AI fields. The presentation should be improved. Once the following comments have been addressed, I recommend to accept it.

1. The motivation should be further clarified.
2. The references should be updated by adding newly published results.

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-1: (weak reject)
This paper discusses the importance and necessity of causality analysis, summarizes the development course, basic theory and existing problems of medical causality, and finally discusses the future development direction of causality and its application in medicine. In order to improve the quality, I suggest the authors consider the following questions:
1 Some of the languages and punctuation need to be considered. In this article, the first letter after the comma is capitalized in many places, such as "......Nowadays, Due to......", "On the other hand, Promoted......", and even missing punctuation in some places, such as"......the incidence of the disease It develops between......", and in the abstract many blanks between sentences are missing.
2 The references cited in this article provide early research on medical causality. If the research of the past two years is supplemented with references, the paper will be more forward-looking.
3 Most of the examples, which are given for the application of models or research methods in this paper, are generalized in one sentence. It is better to explain at least one example in detail to make the article more convincing.
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需要大改,也需要更新参考文献。一般情况下是改投,也可试着重投

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