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jonan

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[交流] 是重投还是另外找别的期刊?

6月末投了一篇文章到Bioresource Technology, 前天被拒了。有点郁闷。想大家帮帮处处注意,看看审稿人的意见,我是该好好修改文章后重新投这个杂志还是另外找其他的杂志啊?

Reviewers' comments:
Reviewer #1: This manuscript describes hydrogen production by Rhodobacter
sphaeroides using the byproducts derived from pretreated lignocellulose. Using biomass such as lignocellulose and cellulose to produce sustainable energy is an interesting topic.It has been well-known that photosynthetic purple nonsulfur bacteria (Rhodobacter,Rhodopseudomonas and Rhodospirillum) have capacity of hydrogen production mediated by nitrogenase using volatile fatty acides in the absent of ammonium. Thus, it is undoubted that hydrogen was produced from lipid fermentation effluent or organic acids presented in the effluent by Rhodobacter. Although authors studied hydrogen production from the sole organic acids and combination of organic acids as well as fermentation effluent under different concentrations and pHs, the absence of analysis of combination
effect of organic acids on hydrogen production really decreasing its interest. More
analysis and discussions on this should be given.

1. Hydrogen yield and hydrogen production rate should be given.

2. P5, L57 and P8 L29, Hydrogen production by PNS bacteria can be inhibited by
ammonium (under non-nitrogen-fixing conditions). Authors should explain why the
ammonium was added to media.

3. What gas atmosphere was used for entire experiments?

4. Why did the authors not use a fermentative hydrogen producing bacteria instead of
Tichosponron to enhance hydrogen yield.

5. Basically medium pH increases when PNS grew. Authors should discuss why pH
was stable (around 7) in Fig1..

6. The error bars should be shown based on testing in triple in the figures.

7. Introduction: The authors made a wrong description about categories of
biohydrogen production (P3, 7-21). Wording modification is needed. Photosynthetichydrogen producing bacteria also include algae and Cyanobacteria.

8. Some recent related literatures on hydrogen production by Rhodobacter are
missed.

Reviewer #2: There are a number of grammatical errors and instances of badly
constructed sentences. Much more discussion on the experimental data is necessary.
Specific comments:
1. P3L5-8: "digestion" is not the only method of biohydrogen production!
2. P3L8-16: Clostridium butyricum is not the only microbe responsible for dark
fermentation!
3. P3L16-22: Rhodobacter sphaeroides is not the only microbe responsible for photo
fermentation!
4. P4L29-38: meaning?
5. P4L40-49: This is an experimental method!
6. P4L52-58: meaning?
7. P7L21-24: meaning?
8. P7L54-57: It is nitrogen concentration, not nitrogen!
9. P9L32-43: You do not need to describe the experimental methods again!
10. P9L43-44: meaning?
11. P10L7-11: How did you know the cell growth?
12. P11L21-27: meaning?
13. P11L27, 38, 49: It is "concentrations", not concentration!
14. P12L16-19: meaning!
15. P12L30, P13L49: "lipid fermentation"?
16. P12L52: "R sphaeroides ZX-5 fermentation"?
17. P13L46-50: meaning?
18. P13L57: Did you measure "residual sugars"?
19. P14L10-14: meaning?
20. P14L35: "organic acid was low"?
21. Tables 1 and 2: Were the OD values before or after fermentation? For "Time", you used different units in both tables. It was not "Total H2"!
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按照审稿人的意见认真修改吧!!重投其实也是不错的选择!!另投的话又是一个漫长的周期啊!祝福楼主好运哈!
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和楼主同病相怜,我也是6月投的,前两天刚被拒掉了,正在苦闷中……

我感觉,既然审稿都审完了,再投的可能性不大,好好看review 的意见,修改后再投其他刊物吧!
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引用回帖:
Originally posted by jonan at 2009-8-9 23:06:
6月末投了一篇文章到Bioresource Technology, 前天被拒了。有点郁闷。想大家帮帮处处注意,看看审稿人的意见,我是该好好修改文章后重新投这个杂志还是另外找其他的杂志啊?

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好好修改一下吧,我看两个审稿人都让你增加讨论部分,还有英语的修改。
按照这些意见好好修改,一点一点回答,然后再投一次,和编辑说明一下,我觉得还会送给以前的审稿人,中的纪律还是有的
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如果能按意见修改好,重投中的几率会很高!不能的话,要尽量改,改投,还要希望不要落到同一审稿人那里。
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Originally posted by mandolin at 2009-8-9 23:40:

好好修改一下吧,我看两个审稿人都让你增加讨论部分,还有英语的修改。
按照这些意见好好修改,一点一点回答,然后再投一次,和编辑说明一下,我觉得还会送给以前的审稿人,中的纪律还是有的

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