| 查看: 427 | 回复: 5 | |||
| 当前主题已经存档。 | |||
| 当前只显示满足指定条件的回帖，点击这里查看本话题的所有回帖 | |||
hzf_055木虫 (正式写手)
|
[交流]
【求助完毕】英语翻译，麻烦高手帮忙修改一下，谢谢！
|
||
|
老外对文章语法和表述都不满意，最近在努力修改中。希望高手帮忙看一下下面两句表述有没有问题。谢谢！ 1、Therefore, there has been increasing interest to develop alternative means for diagnosis. Recently, more and more investigators are looking for optical tools with rapid and non-invasive ability of providing information about morphological and structural changes for the early detection of thyroid cancer 2、the second harmonic generation (SHG) imaging has been successfully used for imaging structural protein arrays, especially type I collagen which mainly due to the intrinsic non-centrosymmetric structure of collagen [ Last edited by qingshaojun0823 on 2009-9-21 at 16:49 ] |
回复此楼» 猜你喜欢
化学工程调剂289
已经有42人回复
-
282，求调剂
已经有6人回复
-
化工调剂求导师收留！一志愿失利，踏实肯干，有植物提取科研经历
已经有5人回复
-
277 数一104，学硕，求调剂
已经有5人回复
-
087100初试311求调剂
已经有3人回复
-
297求调剂
已经有7人回复
-
化学工程与技术324调剂
已经有10人回复
-
085404，285分求调剂
已经有12人回复
-
0856专硕求调剂 希望是a区院校
已经有9人回复
-
一志愿211电子信息347求调剂
已经有4人回复
tibetnamco
金虫 (正式写手)
- 应助: 72 (初中生)
- 金币: 2090
- 散金: 10
- 红花: 38
- 帖子: 801
- 在线: 112.5小时
- 虫号: 796561
- 注册: 2009-06-18
- 专业: 污染物行为过程及其环境效
★ ★ ★
小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包，谢谢回帖交流
qingshaojun0823(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢积极应助，欢迎常来！ 7-16 21:31
小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包，谢谢回帖交流
qingshaojun0823(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢积极应助，欢迎常来！ 7-16 21:31
|
很多明显的chinglish ——抛砖引玉 1、Therefore, there has been increasing interest to develop alternative means for diagnosis. Recently, more and more investigators are looking for optical tools with rapid and non-invasive ability of providing information about morphological and structural changes for the early detection of thyroid cancer 前言部分要具体、再具体，句子要简练。increasing interest to develop alternative means？少用big words，growing interest够了；主语呢？more and more干什么，一个 more就够了；recently具体一些 ；of providing information about 和一个about有什么区别 ； the early detection 的the多于 2、the second harmonic generation (SHG) imaging has been successfully used for imaging structural protein arrays, especially type I collagen which mainly due to the intrinsic non-centrosymmetric structure of collagen successfully used 就是used，有没成功的used的吗？ 后面的mainly 也是，有不mainly 的due to吗？（due to应该是 be due to）前面还有一个especially强调呢；这句话不完整吧...... 有待改进的方面很多。 句法方面的改进更深奥一些，等高人继续吧—— |
4楼2009-07-16 20:55:15
exfo
铁杆木虫 (著名写手)
- 应助: 0 (幼儿园)
- 金币: 7553.6
- 散金: 299
- 红花: 1
- 帖子: 1184
- 在线: 78.2小时
- 虫号: 609282
- 注册: 2008-09-22
- 专业: 计算机应用技术
★ ★
小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包，谢谢回帖交流
qingshaojun0823(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢交流！ 7-16 16:14
小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包，谢谢回帖交流
qingshaojun0823(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢交流！ 7-16 16:14
|
Therefore, there has been increasing interest to develop alternative means for diagnosis. 感觉不是很地道啊。 楼主想表示这是个研究热点的意思吗？ 第二句的investigators是要表示研究人员吗？ 不知道researchers或者scientist行不行 而且感觉那个形态和结构的变化跟后面那个癌症早期检测似乎逻辑不对劲啊 希望抛砖引玉，等着高手出山 |
2楼2009-07-16 11:24:47
wangwei2008
木虫 (职业作家)
小木虫之移花宫主
- 应助: 6 (幼儿园)
- 金币: 4264.6
- 散金: 1
- 红花: 1
- 帖子: 4265
- 在线: 152.7小时
- 虫号: 495631
- 注册: 2008-01-15
- 专业: 植物生理与生化
★ ★
小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包，谢谢回帖交流
qingshaojun0823(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢积极应助！欢迎常来！ 7-16 21:31
小木虫(金币+0.5):给个红包，谢谢回帖交流
qingshaojun0823(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢积极应助！欢迎常来！ 7-16 21:31
|
我也只是说说而已，不一定对。 1、Therefore, there has been increasing interest to develop alternative means for diagnosis. Recently, more and more investigators are looking for optical tools with rapid and non-invasive ability of providing information about morphological and structural changes for the early detection of thyroid cancer 改为：Therefore, developing alternative means for diagnosis has drawn more and more researchers' attentions and they tried to looking for optical tools with rapid and non-invasive ability of providing information about morphological and structural changes for the early detection of thyroid cancer. 修改理由：一是强调去发展另外的方法，故作为主语表示强调；二是西方人一般喜欢用长句。 |
3楼2009-07-16 20:16:35
hzf_055
木虫 (正式写手)
- 应助: 0 (幼儿园)
- 金币: 1862.9
- 散金: 1405
- 红花: 1
- 帖子: 391
- 在线: 239.3小时
- 虫号: 132477
- 注册: 2005-12-13
- 性别: GG
- 专业: 光谱技术
5楼2009-07-17 09:56:19
