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dcb005(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 6-8 12:40
상황 1
혜연 : Hello, May I speak to 애진 please?
애진 : Hello, this is 애진? What's up?
혜연 : What are you going to do tonight?
애진 : I'm going to meet my friend.
혜연 : Do you have any plans next Saturday?
애진 : Yes, I do. But I am Free after six.
혜연 : Do you want to go out to dinner with me?
애진 : OK. Let's meet at Gangnam Station at 7:00 pm.
혜연 : See you next Saturday.
상황 2
애진 : Hi, 혜연. You look happy is there any special reason?
혜연 : Yes, it's because of my new boyfriend.
애진 : Would you buy me a bite to eat if you are in a good mood?
혜연 : Yes, I will treat you.
애진 : Would you like to go to VIPS?
혜연 : Sure, that sounds great.
상황 3
애진 : Are you happy with him?
혜연 : Yes, We are like a match made in heaven.
애진 : When did you first meet him?
혜연 : I met him one month ago. Are you seeing somebody?
애진 : NO, I'd like to meet someone decent. Would you introduce me to someone?
혜연 : I'm going to introduce you to a cool guy.
애진 : Really? Oh, thank you.

我看到一点点地方!不知道有没有找对!红字部分是我改的!
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11楼2009-06-08 11:28:40
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liqiuyan

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dcb005(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 6-8 12:41
修改如下：
상황 1
혜연 : Hello, May I speak to 애진, please?
애진 : Hello, this is 애진. What's up?
혜연 : What are you going to do tonight?
애진 : I'm going to meet my friend.
혜연 : Do you have any plans next Saturday?
애진 : Yes, I do. But I am free after six.
혜연 : Do you want to go out to dinner with me?
애진 : OK. Let's meet at Gangnam Station at 7:00 pm.
혜연 : See you next Saturday.
상황 2
애진 : Hi, 혜연. You look happy. Is there any special reason?
혜연 : Yes, it's because of my new boyfriend.
애진 : Would you buy me a bite to eat if you are in a good mood?
혜연 : Yes, I will treat you.
애진 : Would you like to go to VIPS?
혜연 : Sure, that sounds great.
상황 3
애진 : Are you happy with him?
혜연 : sure, We are like a match made in heaven.
애진 : When did you first meet him?
혜연 : I met him one month ago. Are you seeing somebody?
애진 : NO, I'd like to meet someone decent. Would you introduce me to someone?
혜연 : I'm going to introduce you to a cool guy.
애진 : Really? Oh, thank you.
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12楼2009-06-08 11:35:51
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040402043

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dcb005(金币+2,VIP+0):谢谢 6-8 12:41
Yes, I have. But I am Free after six.
这句Free,应是free
Do you want to go out to dinner with me?
这句to dinner应是for dinner
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13楼2009-06-08 12:16:57
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supermen
14楼2009-06-08 14:20:34
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Dawingle

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애진 : I'm going to meet my friend. meet 要改为see吧 第一次见面采用meet
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15楼2009-06-27 14:48:06
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Dawingle

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혜연 : Do you want to go out to dinner with me? 语感上 go out for dinner  比较顺啊
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16楼2009-06-27 14:49:21
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rendongcai

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dcb005(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢 6-28 14:58
看起来，像是打电话，但是用语太正式了，例如第三句（“what are you going to do tonight? ”）; 似乎很少人会在日常生活中这么说，一般会说“Do you have any plan for tonight?” 或者直接问, "Are you free tonight? "; 其他的句子同理。
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17楼2009-06-27 14:58:51
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