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[交流] 求助分析投稿后编辑给的意见

投稿后编辑给的意见如下：

Dear Dr. Lei:
Your manuscript # APP-2009-03-0917 entitled "Preparation and properties of the phenolic foams with controllable nanometer pore structure" which you submitted to the Journal of Applied Polymer Science,  has been reviewed.  I am sorry to inform you that based on the reviewers' comments, I must ask you to revise and resubmit this manuscript before I can reach an editorial decision.  The comments from reviewers are included at the bottom of this letter.
Please note that resubmitting your manuscript does not guarantee eventual acceptance, and that your  resubmission will be subject to re-review by the reviewers before a decision is rendered.
If you choose to resubmit your manuscript, go to http://mc.manuscriptcentral.com/app  and login to your Author Center.  Look  for "Manuscripts with Decisions" and select "Create a Resubmission" located next to the manuscript  number.  Then, follow the steps for resubmitting your manuscript.  Please submit your revision by 24-Nov-2009.
May I take this opportunity to thank you for considering our Journal for the publication of your work.  We hope that you will consider resubmitting your manuscript to the Journal.

With kind regards,
Prof. Sergei Nazarenko
Associate Editor, Journal of Applied Polymer Science
sergei.nazarenko@usm.edu

Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:
Reviewer: 1
Comments to the Author
The manuscript presents interesting results of average pore size of phenolic foams. The revisions listed below are necessary to allow publication.
1) The results should be compared with reference “Kim BG, Lee DG. Development of microwave foaming method far phenolic insulation foams. JOURNAL OF MATERIALS PROCESSING TECHNOLOGY; 2008. p. 716-9”.
2) Figure captions and table titles need revision:
Table II □ write: ..”phenolic foams produced at different pressures”
Figure 1 □ specify the sample
3) Phenolic foam properties in Table I were obtained by the authors? Describe equipments and methodology for that?
4) Pore size distribution is the most important result of this work. Add details about the measurement and its accuracy.
5)  English should be revised. For instance on page 3: “PF, containing 9% hexamine by weight, was resolved into anhydrous ethanol…” The authors probably want to say “dissolved into anhydrous ethanol”. Other language problems can be found in the manuscript.

Reviewer: 2
Comments to the Author
I am not able to recommend the publication of this manuscript. In my opinion, the content, the results presented and the presentation style do not warrant publication as a research article.

First, the writing style needs to be improved throughout the article. The Abstract needs to be revised to convey more specific information about the work presented.

There are numerous such awkward and incorrectly formed sentences and phrases throughout the paper. It is difficult to read the paper in its current form. A careful proof reading and editing is required.
The authors claim in several locations that the pore side is uniform. However, they have neither used any parameter to validate this claim nor quantified pore size uniformity.
What are the experimental uncertainties in the data presented in Tables II and III? Especially, how accurate is the reported pore diameter.
Why are the compressive strength and thermal conductivity data from the Sample made at 2.5MPa not included in Table IV?
Why the pressure was selected to be between 2.5MPa to 4MPa? What happens when the pressure is significantly lowered? Selecting only three pressure levels does not give a complete picture of the dependence of pore size on pressure. Therefore the claim made on page 5 that the effect of the pressure on the pore structure is distinct and less than that of the resin concentration may not be valid for pressure levels lower than 2.5MPa. The authors mention on page 6 that the effect of pressure higher than 4MPa will be studied in a subsequent study. I believe that the result from higher pressure cases should be included in this paper.

The issues raised above need to be addressed with additional experiments. The data provided in the manuscript is too few to warrant publication as a research article in Journal of Applied Science.

审稿人给了许多不好的意见。
上述意见是不是为据稿意见，我应如何处理。是不是修改后重新投稿，给一个新的投稿号，重新以新的稿件形式来审稿。
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