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wangsky111

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本文一篇稿件审稿人说有一段话需要improved,虫友们能不能帮助看看如何修改润色。句子如下:
Limonene degradation was increased with increasing processing pressure at all temperature levels. The curves at higher pressure appear somewhat flatter indicating that limonene degradation rate became somewhat slower with the same increasing amount of pressure at higher levels than at lower levels. At all pressure levels, Limonene degradation was increased as temperature increased. The contour range turned smaller at higher temperature level indicating limonene degradation became somewhat faster with the same increasing amount of temperature at higher levels than at lower levels. A fact that need to be considered is that all increasing pressure or temperature could result in limonene degradation increased, indicating a synergistic effect of pressure and temperature on limonene degradation. Limonene degradation was also increased with increasing processing time at all pressure or temperature levels. Limonene degradation became somewhat slower with the same increasing amount of processing time at higher levels than at lower levels.

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wangsky111(金币+2,VIP+0): 5-24 22:00
把中文贴出来吧
光伏和储能的命运
2楼2009-05-23 10:19:19
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句式单一,头脚有些不配
老是somewhat,把握不准
建议多用从句,长短句合一
同时,建议多用被动语态
3楼2009-05-23 10:24:20
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能不能将somewhat 部分换成a little 或是a few,而且一句话好长,断成短句也许会好点
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wangsky111

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这段话的中文意思如下所示,大家帮我看看有啥不妥的,感激不尽!

在所有温度水平范围内,柠檬烯的降解是随着压力的增加而增加,在较高压力水平下的曲线比较陡峭,表明增加相同数量的压力,高压力水平下的柠檬烯降解速率比低压力水平下的降解速率慢。在所有压力水平范围内,柠檬烯降解随着温度的增加而增加,在高温水平下的等高线间隔变窄,表明增加相同数量的温度,高温水平下的柠檬烯降解比低温力水平下的降解速率快。值得注意的是增加压力和温度都导致柠檬烯降解加快,表明压力和温度有协同效应。在所有压力和温度水平范围内,柠檬烯的降解也随着时间的增加而增加。
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