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【求助】英汉互译一段文字，看看应该怎么改？【有效期5.25】
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帮忙看看这段中文翻译的如何，不行的帮忙改改，编辑说我写的有点啰嗦，让简单一点，中文意思是： 【1】S.O.M. 的加入对ＲＲＳ强度的影响 由于所有的这些直链醇均含有羟基(-OH)，他们可以与MB-Hb 体系通过分子间氢键形成大的聚合物，从而导致RRS强度不同程度的增强，除了甲醇外。可见，醇分子的大小将明显影响体系的ＲＲＳ强度。 (1) The influences of adding S.O.M. on RRS intensity are as follow: Due to there is hydroxyl group (-OH) in all the alcohols, and they can form intermolecular hydrogen bond with MB-Hb system which results in the aggregation of them . The adding of these straight chain alcohols result in enhancing of RRS with different degrees except methanol. It is obvious that the size of the alcohol is a main factor. 【２】所有的这些直链醇中使体系ＲＲＳ增强最敏感的是戊醇，这也许是因为戊醇的体积大小（分子大小）更适合共振增强，并且为MB-Hb 聚合物创造了一个更加的疏水的环境。 (2) All of these straight chain alcohols for the effect of enhancement of RRS intensity which is the most sensitizing is the pentanol. It may be the size of the volume of pentanol is more suitable to form resonance enhancement and to create a more hydrophobic environment for MB-Hb aggregate. 【３】实验结果也表明无论加入哪个S.O.M. ，由于疏水作用，随着S.O.M.用量的增大RRS强度也同时增强。 (3) The results showed that no matter which S.O.M. was added, due to hydrophobic interaction, as the amounts of S.O.M. were increased, the RRS intensity was enhanced, simultaneously . 【4】当加入环己烷时，它的影响较小。这也许是因为其不含有(-OH)而不能与体系形成分子间氢键所导致的。因而，这个现象也正好表明分子间氢键的形成对于共振增强是重要的。 (4) When the cyclohexane was added, its influence was slight. It may be that there is not the hydroxyl group (-OH) and can not form intermolecular hydrogen bond with MB-Hb system in the cyclohexane. So, this phenomenon also indicated that the intermolecular hydrogen bond was important for resonance enhancement. 哪位高手帮忙改改啊，多谢了，几个金币送上，不成敬意  |
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opq691(金币+1,VIP+0):非常感谢，剩下的呢？有么 5-22 18:43
opq691(金币+1,VIP+0):先再给一个 5-22 18:46
opq691(金币+1,VIP+0):非常感谢，剩下的呢？有么 5-22 18:43
opq691(金币+1,VIP+0):先再给一个 5-22 18:46
| (2) Pentanol is the most Sensitizing alcohol for the effect of enhancement to the RRS intensity among all of the straight chain alcohols. It may be the volume of pentanol is more suitable to form resonance enhancement and MB-Hb and to create a more hydrophobic environment for aggregation. |
3楼2009-05-22 15:35:37
4楼2009-05-23 08:42:27
我在你的基础上做了点修改
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opq691(金币+2):非常感谢啊
opq691(金币+2):非常感谢啊
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(1) The influences of adding S.O.M. on RRS intensity are as followed: there are hydroxyl group (-OH) in all straight chain alcohol, and they can form intermolecular hydrogen bond with MB-Hb system which results in the polymeric compound, it will cause enhancing of RRS with different degrees except methanol. |
5楼2009-05-23 11:53:28
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opq691(金币+2,VIP+0):感谢啊，那2，3有什么意见么？能否提点？谢谢 5-23 12:42
opq691(金币+2,VIP+0):感谢啊，那2，3有什么意见么？能否提点？谢谢 5-23 12:42
| (4) for the cyclohexane, its influence is slight. the reason may be it can not form intermolecular hydrogen bond with MB-Hb system for the cyclohexane without hydroxyl group (-OH).So,it also shows that the intermolecular hydrogen bond is important of resonance enhancement. |
6楼2009-05-23 11:59:54
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opq691(金币+2,VIP+0):非常感谢，我再看看 5-23 14:00
opq691(金币+2,VIP+0):非常感谢，我再看看 5-23 14:00
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（2）Pentanol is the most Sensitizing for the effect of enhancement to the RRS intensity amang the straight chain alcohols. It may be the volume of pentanol is more suitable to form resonance enhancement and has created a more hydrophobic environment for MB-Hb aggregate. (3) The results shows that any S.O.M. is added, the RRS intensity would enhance as the amounts of S.O.M. were increased due to the hydrophobic interaction. |
7楼2009-05-23 13:28:37
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opq691(金币+5,VIP+0):非常感谢啊，就等你个过来看看了，呵呵，能不吧剩下的给提点建议2-4，金币剩下的不多了，全给你了 5-25 20:57
opq691(金币+5,VIP+0):非常感谢啊，就等你个过来看看了，呵呵，能不吧剩下的给提点建议2-4，金币剩下的不多了，全给你了 5-25 20:57
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【1】S.O.M. 的加入对ＲＲＳ强度的影响 由于所有的这些直链醇均含有羟基(-OH)，他们可以与MB-Hb 体系通过分子间氢键形成大的聚合物，从而导致RRS强度不同程度的增强，除了甲醇外。可见，醇分子的大小将明显影响体系的ＲＲＳ强度。 (1) The influences of S.O.M. addition to RRS intensity are as following: Due to the hydroxyl group (-OH) in all the linear alcohols except methanol, they form large polymer via combination with MB-Hb system through intermolecular hydrogen bond, which results in different increase on RRS intensity. Therefore, the size of the alcohol molecule obviously affect RRS intensity in the system. |
8楼2009-05-25 13:18:33
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【２】所有的这些直链醇中使体系ＲＲＳ增强最敏感的是戊醇，这也许是因为戊醇的体积大小（分子大小）更适合共振增强，并且为MB-Hb 聚合物创造了一个更加的疏水的环境。 (2) Within all these linear alcohols, pentanol is the most sensitive one which enhance the RRS intensity of the system. This may be due to the size of pentanol molecule, which is more compatible to enhance resonance and to generate a more hydrophobic conditions for MB-Hb aggregation. |
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