24小时热门版块排行榜    

查看: 278  |  回复: 1
当前主题已经存档。

lovesj

荣誉版主 (著名写手)

[交流] 【小木虫原创-为考研写作文】Education and success

从今天开始写文章练笔,希望有英语高手的人为我指点迷津。今天先把自己的习作拿出来,希望就此开展小木虫英语原创之风气。

We know that no more than 40% of people who take the college entrance exams pass. Because a college education is regarded as the key to a successful career, that is, the
higher one people has the degree ,the more he has the opportunity of success. this is a basic viewpoint in today’ s society.
Education is a progressive discovery of our ignorance. By the way of education we know what we don’t know. Education has make a vast population distinguish what is worth reading and doing. How much more profitable for the independent mind it is , noting more than the elementary education , you are able to range through a library at random and read books you are interested in! So,at present ,our country has carried out the nine years obligation education In order to give us more opportunity of receiving education.It can make us have the ability of rudimentary knowledge. I think it is the basis of success throughout our lives. As a result of the ignorance is the root of misfortune. But through education we can rid the misfortune; we can make our soul and brain wise. For these we are able to do better than the people who do not receive education.
At the same time ,however ,we should notice that there are many successors do not have the systematic education because of their poor family or some other reasons. For example ,some of executives have only several years education.  They possibly teach themselves or learn some experience from others during the work. Although they do not possess the high degree ,they can still make success and are very excellent.
But consequently, I believe that we should never stop studying until we die. Only in this way can we have beautiful and successful lives!

真诚的希望各位高手指教。
回复此楼
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

chengyang1122

相关版块跳转 我要订阅楼主 lovesj 的主题更新
普通表情 高级回复(可上传附件)
信息提示
请填处理意见