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很多时候,
我们在作文上花了大把的时间,
但结果却总是不那么令人满意。

这到底是怎么了?
难道天不酬勤??
这其实是由临摹过多的中式思维的范文所导致的结果。
看多了本国人写的所谓范文,
包括china daily,21 century...
让我们的思维变得桎梏。
尤其是培训机构的模版,
更是让更多的创意、创新变得千篇一略,
害人至深!

怎么才能改变这个难堪的局面???
学习和临摹英语国家的本土作文是不二法门!
下面将极其local的私家珍藏400篇无偿奉献!供大家学习!
另附2篇摘选范文,供大家参考是否有下载价值,
以免浪费广大虫友的时间。




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The Flow of the Universe

The flow of the universe moves through everything. It’s in the rocks that form, get pounded into dust, and are blown away, the sprouting of a summer flower born from a seed planted in the spring, the growth cycle that every human being goes through, and the current that takes us down our life’s paths. When we move with the flow, rather than resisting it, we are riding on the universal current that allows us to flow with life.

Many people live their lives struggling against this current. They try to use force or resistance to will their lives into happening the way they think it should. Others move with this flow like a sailor using the wind, trusting that the universe is taking them exactly where they need to be at all times. This flow is accessible to everyone because it moves through and around us. We are always riding this flow. It’s just a matter of whether we are willing to go with it or resist it. Tapping into the flow is often a matter of letting go of the notion that we need to be in control at all times. The flow is always taking you where you need to go. It’s just a matter of deciding whether you plan on taking the ride or dragging your feet.

Learning to step into the flow can help you feel a connection to a force that is greater than you and is always there to support you. The decision to go with the flow can take courage because you are surrendering the notion that you need to do everything by yourself. Riding the flow of the universe can be effortless, exhilarating, and not like anything that you ever expected. When you are open to being in this flow, you open yourself to possibilities that exist beyond the grasp of your control. As a child, you were naturally swept by the flow. Tears of sadness falling down your face could just as quickly turn to tears of laughter. Just the tiniest wave carrying you forward off the shores of the ocean could carry you into peals of delight. Our souls feel good when we go with the flow of the universe. All we have to do is make the choice to ride its currents.




We Are All Connected

There are times when we may feel disconnected from the world. Our actions can seem like they are of no major consequence, and we may feel like we exist in our own vacuum. Yet, the truth is that our simplest thought or action - the decisions we make each day, and how we see and relate to the world - can be incredibly significant and have a profound impact on the lives of those around us, as well as the world at large. The earth and everything on it is bound by an invisible connection between people, animals, plants, the air, the water, and the soil. Insignificant actions on your part, whether positive or negative, can have an impact on people and the environment that seem entirely separate from your personal realm of existence. Staying conscious of the interconnection between all things can help you think of your choices and your life in terms of the broader effect you may be creating.

Think of buying a wooden stool. The wood was once part of a tree which is part of a forest. A person was paid to fell the tree, another to cut the wood, and yet another to build the stool. Their income may have had a positive effect on their families, just as the loss of the tree may have had a negative impact on the forest or the animals that made that tree their home. An encouraging word to a young child about their special talent can influence this person to develop their gift so that one day their inventions can change the lives of millions. A poem written “merely” to express oneself can make a stranger reading it online from thousands of miles away feel less alone because there is someone else out there who feels exactly the way they do.

Staying conscious of your connection to all things can help you think of your choices in terms of their impact. We are powerful enough that what we do and say can reverberate through the lives of people we may never meet. Understanding that you are intimately connected with all things and understanding your power to affect our world can be the first step on the road to living more consciously.


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雨下渔舟

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谢谢,谢谢。。
打算把另外的300篇也传上来。
无偿奉献给虫友们,
希望大家多多支持。

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3ks!!!
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lisicheng

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怎么里面有乱码啊????
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看起来还不错
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谢谢楼主
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非常好的资料!
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thanks a lot
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谢谢!谢谢!LZ真是太好了~
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谢谢楼主!
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谢谢!!
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谢谢楼主!
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引用回帖:
Originally posted by lisicheng at 2009-4-23 12:49:
怎么里面有乱码啊????

有乱码的地方是让你补写的吧,看了这么多,也该能写点什么了,不管是狗尾续貂还是画龙点睛,能写了就发挥这帖子的作用了。
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谢了!!
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谢谢楼主!
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谢谢楼主
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大大大大大大大大大大
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不错~~
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谢谢楼主的奉献,支持
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谢谢了,you r a nice person
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