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commandos2

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[交流] 求高手帮忙修改修改文章啊

因为英语不过关,已经被退回来了,是关于COD废水处理方面的,小虫金币不多,就全发了。谢谢了!

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commandos2(金币+5,VIP+0):谢谢关注了 3-13 11:17
一共27页,难度大了点!不是本专业,爱莫能助!

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从小吓大

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谢谢关注啊,其实字数不多的确,大概3000个单词左右把,真后悔没学好英文啊
3楼2009-03-05 23:19:42
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commandos2

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有哪位高手帮帮忙吗?
4楼2009-03-06 11:17:59
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commandos2

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看来确实要求太高了
大家能不能先帮忙改改摘要吧,50 金币

Adsorbent/ferrite composites can adsorb and catalytic degrade organics in the COD-rich wastewater treatment. In this study, we prepared a rice hull/MnFe2O4 composite (RHM) via calcination under nitrogen atmosphere, and used it to treat COD-rich wastewater under assist of microwave radiation. Rice hull was pyrolysed to a porous substrate consisted of silica and active carbon under high temperature treatment. Monodisperse spinel MnFe2O4 nanoparticles with mean diameter of ~59 nm are distributed on the substrate. Assisted by the microwave radiation, RHM is motivated to a hotspot of adsorption and catalysis and can remove more than 70% COD of wastewater within 6 min. The maximum COD removal is 73.46% under conditions of 15 mg•mL-1 RHM and 6 min microwave radiation. Although the BET surface area of RHM is half of rice hull ash (RHA), the COD removal of RHM is 7%~20% higher than that of RHA. It is attributed to the presence of MnFe2O4, which enhanced the catalytic activity of RHM. RHM can be regenerated via water washing. However, the surface area and the maximum COD removal of RHM decrease for each regeneration cycle. This novel rice hull/MnFe2O4 composite is a hopeful wastewater treating-agent with advantages of low cost and rapid processing.
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commandos2

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哪位高手帮忙修改修改啊
6楼2009-03-11 14:15:01
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xxzhang010

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Adsorbent/ferrite composites can adsorb and degrade the organics in the COD-rich wastewater treatment. In this study, we prepared a rice hull/MnFe2O4 composite (RHM) via calcination under nitrogen atmosphere, and used it to treat COD-rich wastewater under assist of microwave radiation. Rice hull was pyrolysed to a porous substrate consisted of silica and active carbon under high temperature treatment. Monodisperse spinel MnFe2O4 nanoparticles with mean diameter of ~59 nm are distributed on the substrate. Assisted by the microwave radiation, RHM was motivated to a hotspot of adsorption and catalysis which could remove more than 70% COD of wastewater within 6 min. The maximum COD removal was 73.46% when the concentration of RHM was 15 mg•mL-1 and the irradiation time of microwave radiation was 6 minutes. Although the BET surface area of RHM is half of rice hull ash (RHA), the COD removal of RHM is 7%~20% higher than that of RHA. It was attributed to the presence of MnFe2O4, which enhanced the catalytic activity of RHM. RHM can be regenerated via water washing. However, the surface area and the maximum COD removal of RHM decrease for each regeneration cycle. With THE advantages of low cost and rapid processing, this novel rice hull/MnFe2O4 composite could gain promising application in wastewater treating-agent.
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commandos2(金币+50,VIP+0):谢谢啊~~~ 3-13 11:18
刚才弄错了,不好意思
Adsorbent/ferrite composites can adsorb and degrade organics in the COD-rich wastewater treatment. In this study, a rice hull/MnFe2O4 composite (RHM) was prepared via calcination under nitrogen atmosphere and used to treat COD-rich wastewater with the assistance of microwave radiation. Rice hull was deposited on a porous substrate consisted of silica and active carbon, and heat-treated under high temperature. Monodisperse spinel MnFe2O4 nanoparticles whose mean diameter was around 59 nm are distributed on the substrate. With the assistance by microwave radiation, RHM was motivated to a hotspot of adsorption and catalysis which could remove more than 70% COD of wastewater within 6 min. The maximum COD removal was 73.46% when the concentration of RHM was 15 mg/mL-1 and the irradiation time of microwave radiation was6 minutes. Although the BET surface area of RHM is half of rice hull ash (RHA), the COD removal of RHM is 7%~20% higher than that of RHA. It was attributed to the presence of MnFe2O4, which enhanced the catalytic activity of RHM. RHM can be regenerated via water washing. However, the surface area and the maximum COD removal of RHM decrease for each regeneration cycle. With THE advantages of low cost and rapid processing, this novel rice hull/MnFe2O4 composite could gain promising application in wastewater treating-agent.
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commandos2

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再来帮忙修改修改实验的一个部分吧,是COD随样品用量的变化的。75金币
3.2. Effect of sample dosage on the COD of wastewater
Fig. 3 shows the effect of sample dosage ranging from 0.0 to 20 mg•mL-1 on the COD removal of wastewater. The COD removal increases significantly with the dosage of RHM or RHA when the dosage was less than 20 mg•mL-1. Thereafter, the COD removal changes slightly and maintains at 73% (RHM) or 66% (RHA). Compared with RHA, the COD removal of RHM is much higher at identical dosages. For instance, the COD removal of RHM is ~18% higher than that of RHA when the sample dosage was 5 mg•mL-1. Moreover, the maximum COD removal of RHM (73.5%, at dosage of 15 mg•mL-1) is ~7% higher than that of RHA (66.5%, at dosage of 25 mg•mL-1). Because the surface area of RHA (433.90 m2•g-1) is twice as RHM (214.54 m2•g-1), RHA should present stronger adsorption ability than that of RHM. Therefore, the catalytic ability of RHM is stronger than that of RHA, attributed to the presence of MnFe2O4. Organics was adsorbed to the surface of RHM and then catalytic degraded by the ferrite nanoparticles during the wastewater treatment, which is consistent with former researches [38, 41] .
3.3. Effect of microwave treatment on the COD of wastewater
Fig. 4 shows the variations of the COD of wastewater as a function of microwave heating time. When the wastewater was treated by 20 mg•mL-1 RHM or RHA without microwave heating, the COD removal is as low as less than 7%, which is attributed to the inadequate contract between RHM and organics. When the microwave radiation was added, the COD removal starts to increase significantly. The COD removal increases considerably in the first 3 min, from 41% to 72% for RHM and 19% to 60% for RHA. Thereafter, the COD removal changes little and maintains at ~73% for RHM and ~65% for RHA.
The microwave treatment reveals that both RHM and RHA will reach theirs maximum COD removal within 6 min under the assist of microwave radiation. It is contributed to two reasons. First, microwave radiation will selective heat and motivate some special materials such as active carbon and magnetic materials to be hotspots [43] . These hotspots adsorb and catalytic degrade the organics of wastewater rapidly. Second, the quantum energy of microwave can motivate the rotation of molecules and decrease the activation energy of reactions, which facilitate the breaking of chemical bonds and the adsorption of RHM or RHA for organics [31, 44] . Note that RHM reaches its maximum COD removal earlier than RHA and the COD removal of RHM is higher than that of RHA at all periods, indicating that RHM is easier to be heated by the microwave radiation. It is still attributed to the presence of MnFe2O4.

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commandos2(金币+5,VIP+0):谢谢关注 3-16 08:11
我试试吧。
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