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NY_sky

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For A, the values of pseudo-first-order and pseudo-second-order rate equations were 0.99 and 0.90, respectively, suggesting that adsorption processes can be well described by the pseudo-first-order kinetic model, indicating the physical adsorption is the rate limiting step. For AB1, AB2 and AB3, it was observed that most of the values were superior to 0.99, and theoretical values  qe were close to experimental values qe. As a result, the adsorption Pb(II) by AB1, AB2 and AB3 appears to follow pseudo-first-order and pseudo-second-order reaction kinetics, and was physical and chemical interaction. Similar conclusions were also reported by the earlier researchers, who studied the most of the adsorption systems follow pseudo-first-order or pseudo-second-order kinetic model.
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爱与雨下: 金币+1 2017-12-28 22:17:22
NY_sky(fjtony163代发): 金币+25, 代发 2018-03-11 11:28:05
不太清楚唉,能否添加些信息,究竟想说明什么? rate constant, not value of .... rate ?  how is that going to help you to determine which kinetic model it is?

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2楼: Originally posted by genhunter at 2017-12-28 10:57:52
不太清楚唉,能否添加些信息,究竟想说明什么? rate constant, not value of .... rate ?  how is that going to help you to determine which kinetic model it is?

这段话是动力学的解释,我觉得写得不太好。想润色一下
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NY_sky(fjtony163代发): 金币+25, 代发 2018-03-11 11:28:15
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3楼: Originally posted by NY_sky at 2017-12-28 13:46:26
这段话是动力学的解释,我觉得写得不太好。想润色一下...

从你写的来看,不是啰嗦的问题,是逻辑关系模糊的问题。
我不是这个专业,但是好的论文,即便是外专业的人,也应该能看懂逻辑因果关系。
比如,第一句连续两个 suggesting 和indicating, 这两个从句之间又是什么关系呢?因果?并列?
建议你试试能不能用中文把这一段的逻辑意思捋顺,有时候英文啰嗦的原因其实是自己没有弄明白之间的关系。
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