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[交流] September

September

we go along the park, in light of the moon.
step in the wind, soft.
your dimple seems to be the light,
and all that's best of deep and shallow.

cicada play the Moonlight song.
I always want to hold my love, run and run.
but, now everything meet my heart.
I hold my love and moon's soul.

time put time in paint,
love put love in poem.
autumn put autumn in wind.
the berry turn to mellow.

look at the starry skies,
your eyes twinkling, like a little girl,
took her to pick strawberry.
the leaves wait for yellow.

2017-09-21

September


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2楼: Originally posted by 劉梦杰/Silver at 2017-09-26 13:32:04
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白慕水: only English here~ 2017-10-04 13:09:21
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白慕水: only English here~ 2017-10-04 13:09:44
你自己写的吗?要是再能押韵一点能当歌词
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白慕水: 金币+1, I agree with you 2017-10-04 13:10:14
time put time in paint,
love put love in poem.
autumn put autumn in wind. ......
amazing...
stay low key, work hard, and do your best
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