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Reviewers' comments:
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Reviewer E:

The manuscript by Wu et al. reviews the role of Gli-associated oncogenes, in
particular Gli-1, in cancer development, and as a potential target for
cancer therapy.  Gli-1 is an important oncogene and is found to be
overexpressed in a variety of cancers. The manuscript provides a good
overview of the current state of knowledge of the role of Gli-1 in mediating
signalling through the Hedgehog pathway, and how alterations in Gli-1 may
contribute to cancer development.  The manuscript also focuses on the
potential of inhibitors of Gli-1 and other components of the Hedgehog
pathway to be used in cancer therapy.  An extensive reference list is
provided, covering relevant articles in the field.

However, there are two major issues with the current manuscript which must
be corrected before it could be published.

1. The grammar requires extensive correction, as the errors detract
significantly from the meaning of the key points, and would make it
difficult for readers to fully understand the points being made in the
review.

2. In particular in the discussion of inhibitors of Gli-1 and other
components of the Hedgehog pathway, a clear distinction must be made between
effects demonstrated in cell culture, models, in xenograft experiments in
animal models, and effects in clinical trials.  This distinction is not
clear in the present manuscript, and this will lead to confusion on the part
of readers as to the current state of development of Gli-1 inhibitors for
cancer treatment. For example, resveratrol is described as a medicine
(Section 1.3), but this may be an overstatement. A more critical analysis
of the data with regard to potential Gli inhibitors is required in order for
the review to be of maximum benefit to cancer researchers.

Reviewer L:

The work titled “Glioma-associated oncogene especially Gli-1 function in
the carcinogenesis and cancer targeted therapy” is based on an interesting
area. The work can be considered for publication; however, it needs some
serious revisions before its acceptance. The manuscript must be revised as
per following comments-
1. The title looks difficult to understand, it may be revised something like
Role of glioma-associated Gli-1 oncogene in the carcinogenesis and cancer
targeted therapy.
2. Information provided in the manuscript is not adequate as I can see few
important researches like “Scientific Reports 6, Article number: 22184
(2016)”, BMC Cancer. 2009;9:298, etc. are not included.
3. Language editing is also required as few phrases are written
grammatically wrong for example, “in abstract section - Glioma-associated
oncogene (Gli) belongs…”; “in introduction - therapeutic target for
cancers…; resveratrol and cyclopamine”; “GLI-1 CLOSLY RELATED”;
“Moreover,…”; “exerts anticancer effects through”; “ITRA, an
inhibitor of Smo”, etc.
4. Delete phrase “In our review, we summarized the Gli function in the
carcinogenesis and cancer targeted therapy” from introduction section as
it is also written in the abstract.

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Editorial comments:

This MS covers a good topic. However, there are major concerns over the
presentation and the language quality. The following should be carefully
addressed by the authors:

1. The rationale and the significance should be clearly stated in the
introduction section.
2. The abstract should be expanded to cover the major findings in the field.
3. The references should be updated.
4. A professional editing for language and style is needed. A certificate
for such an editing should be provided when resubmitting this MS.
5. The CCDT format should be followed.

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