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为了探索电流体动力学干燥机理,优化干燥工艺,提高干燥效率,本文通过采用
针电极、线电极和板电极在不同的电压下进行豆腐的干燥实验,同时进行了针电极下豆腐加玻璃罩与不加罩的对比实验。实验结果表明:采用板电极干燥效果不明显,而采用线电极和针电极能获得较大的干燥速度,加玻璃罩后豆腐的干燥速度几乎不随干燥电压变化且与对照组相近.
In order to explore the mechanism of Electrohydrodynamic (EHD) drying, and improve the drying technique as well as the drying efficiency of Electrohydrodynamic (EHD) drying, a needle electrode; a wire electrode and a plate electrode have been experimentally evaluated respectively in this study. The samples used are 90×80×5 mm Tofu contained in the Petri dish, which were put in high voltage electrosatics field formed by a needle electrode, a wire electrode and a plate electrode respectively, By changing the voltage, the factors related to the drying rate are quantitatively studied. At same time,   the comparative experiment ofTofu with plus glass enclosures and not have been completed.The results indicate high voltage electrosatics field formed by a plate electrode that cannot  improve the drying rate obviously, while a needle electrode and a wire electrode can improve the drying rate significantly,the drying rate of tofu with plus glass enclosures almost didnot changed with voltage,

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WHQ197(金币+2):谢谢! 2-1 09:20
针对句子与你共同学习一下,In order to explore the mechanism of Electrohydrodynamic (EHD) drying, and    (to)      improve the drying technique as well as the……
a needle electrode; a wire electrode and a plate electrode have been experimentally evaluated respectively in this study.把分号改成逗号,同时你的英语理解为是对几个电极进行评价,如果不是这个意思,不妨使用employ一词,……be employed to evaluate the efficiency of……
At same time觉得应该加个the较通顺些。
the comparative experiment ofTofu with plus glass enclosures and not have been completed这个句子似乎少了些成分啊……
最后一句太冗长,建议重新组织。
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WHQ197(金币+6):谢谢! 2-1 09:19
In order to explore the mechanism,improve the drying technique and the drying efficiency of Electrohydrodynamic (EHD) drying, drying experiment using a needle electrode, a wire electrode and a plate electrode have been  evaluated respectively in this study. The experimental samples are 90×80×5 mm Tofu contained in the Petri dish, which were put in high voltage electrosatics field formed by a needle electrode, a wire electrode and a plate electrode respectively. By changing the voltage, the factors related to the drying rate are quantitatively studied. At the same time,   the experiment of Tofu with and without plus glass enclosures was compared.The results indicate high voltage electrosatics field formed by a plate electrode that cannot  improve the drying rate obviously, while a needle electrode and a wire electrode can improve the drying rate significantly,the drying rate of tofu with plus glass enclosures almost didnot changed with voltage,
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