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94230090

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[交流] 英文RESUME,大家帮着挑挑错误吧

RESUME
Basic Information:
Name:######
Gender:Male
Nationality: P. R. C.,the Han
Date of Birth:#######
Marital Status: Unmarried
Health condition:Good
Birthplace: Yanzhou City,Shandong Province
Current Residency: Tangshan City,Hebei Province
Mobile Phone:##########
Email:###############
Education: Bachelor of Science
Major: Biology Science

English Skills: Application of English proficiency in reading and writing,can understand english report, especially in food quality etc. professional words,and Passed CET-6.

Computer Abilities: Passed the National Computer Rank Examination 3,and skilled in use of office softwares.

Hobbies: Reading, Travelling, playing basketball.

Education background: 2001.09-2005.07 Shandong University at Weihai Major in Biology Science

Training Course:
In Oct 2006 Take part in internal auditor’s train and get the license of internal auditor.
In May 2007 Take part in microbiological examination’s train and get the license of technician.
In Apr 2008 Take part in ISO22000 quality system's train and enterprise's application.
In Jul 2008 Take part in QS train and take charge of application.

Self-evaluation:
Good communication skill, cooperative and hard-working, good team player.

Work Experience:
Jun.2008-present bbs.foodmate.net, as a part-time Moderator.
Oct.2008-present Tangshan Mengniu Limited Company, as a laboratory technician.
Dec. 2007-Oct.2008 Jinan Jinwang Food Co.,Ltd., as a QC manager in QC Department.
Apr.2007- Dec. 2007 Weihai Haidu Group, as a CIQ declarer in Trade Department.
Sep. 2005-Apr.2007 Weihai Haidu Group, as a QC Lab Supervisor in Central Laboratory.
Jul.2005-Sep. 2005 Rongcheng Haidu Food Co.,Ltd. as a laboratory technician.

Position to apply:

QC Lab Supervisor or laboratory technician.

Current Salary: 21600 BMB /Year.
Desired Salary: 24000-30000 BMB/Year.

Dear Sir or Madam:

Thank you for spending time to read my application.First of all, I simply introduced myself. My name is Wangfei ,and I am 28 years old.I graduated from Shandong University At Weihai in 2005 and my major is Biological science.After graduation, I was employed by Rongcheng Haidu Food Co.,Ltd. as a laboratory technician for a few months. During this period I gained some practical skills.Then I was transferred to the Central Laboratory of Weihai Haidu Group for the work of laboratory accreditation. The lab through the accreditation of CNAS Through our efforts.I worked for two years in the position and I got a lot of knowledge from it.Later I was transferred to Trade Department as a CIQ declarer for nearly one year.In December 2007,I quit my job for Emotional factors.And hen I went to Jinan Jinwang Food Co.,Ltd as a QC manager.The company have passed the certification of ISO22000 with my efforts. I quit again for some reason.Now I working in the Lab of Tangshan Mengniu limited company for a temporary job.But I would like to look for a more challenging opportunity,so I come here, maybe I can’t meet your requirements,but I believe if I am admitted ,I will do my best to increase my levels to meet your demands.
I would appreciate you in reviewing my resume.I am looking forward to your early reply.

Sincerely,
#######

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innovision

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94230090(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢 2-7 02:19
那封自荐信可以开门见山书说的明白些。关于实验室的介绍是必须的,不过把你具体做了什么得到了什么也说一下吧。最后,不要说May be I cannot meet your requirements,这些谦辞就免了吧。

自荐信要体现出自己的个性,而不是仅仅说明自己的经历。希望楼主能再修改一下,祝好运。
3楼2009-01-18 09:13:35
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fengyuzhi

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94230090(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢 2-7 02:19
提两点建议:
1,本科学习期间,有没有参加什么竞赛获奖,或者获得了什么奖学金,如果有的话都可以写上去可以加分
2,对于你的一些经历,如果觉得那些是特别突出的,可以稍作评论
比如:
May 2007 Take part in microbiological examination’s train and get the license of technician
*干了些什么----
*收获了什么----
(这些点刚好是你应征职位需要的,从而体现你qualified这个职位)

个人看法,仅供参考。
Fighting!
2楼2009-01-18 03:10:08
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奋斗5232

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94230090(金币+1,VIP+0):谢谢 2-7 02:19
1、开篇不用做中文式的自我介绍,直接写OBJECTIVE就行;2、小标题用EDUCATION、EXPERIENCE、SPECIAL SKILLS等简洁明了;3、小标题下的各项应用相同的时态,FOR EXAPLE:worked as、、、in 8th,2008--present in、、、Inst、;got 、、、、in 10th 2006;4、自荐信开篇写在哪看到的招聘信息,你对此表现出很大兴趣,证明自己的经历和能力能够做所应聘的工作,最后再写你期望的待遇。 本人的拙见,见笑了祝你马到成功!
菩提本无树,明镜亦非台;本来无一物,何处惹尘埃。
4楼2009-01-18 12:04:34
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phuang

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建议楼主下载一个英文简历模板,把语言精练一下,突出自己的兴趣、经历和所长。愿楼主心想事成!
5楼2009-01-18 12:23:46
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