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zhwj

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小木虫之糟老头

[交流] 有关催化体系 中译英(要求够专业,中国式的自己会)


求助翻译下面这段中文,在论文前言中用,自己写的有点中国化,因此要求要够专业,恳请大家多多指教。



化工生产过程中,80%以上的化学品都要借助于催化技术。一般情况下,在炼油、石化等大宗化学品生产中用的是“多相催化体系”;而精细化学品生产过程中用的多是“均相催化体系”。前者所用催化剂分离、回收利用简便,但操作条件苛刻,反应速度慢;后者虽然反应速度快,条件温和,但催化剂分离、回收利用困难。兼并两者优点并回避各自缺点的催化体系,是众多科学家和企业家共同期盼的目标。

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zhwj(金币+10,VIP+0):谢谢
In the production of the Chemicals, over 80% Chemical Products is by means of the Catalyst Technology. In the ordinary course of events, in the process of infinity Chemicals like oil refining、petrifaction and so on, the heterogeneous catalysis system is used, while in the process of the fine Chemicls, the homogeneous catalysis sysytem is chosed. That is because the catalyzer in the former is easy to separate and recycle, but the operating condition is hard and the reaction velocity is slow. As for the catalyzer in the latter method, though it has the rapid reaction velocity and the operating condition is softness, it is difficult to separate and recycle. It is the common objective for most scientists and enterprisers to find a catalytic system to merger the advantages of the two metheds and avoid their disavantages.
有用的一句话能顶一万句废话
2楼2009-01-06 10:20:57
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chichicui

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In the production of the Chemicals, over 80% of chemicals are produced by means of the Catalyst Technology. Generally, the heterogeneous catalysis system is used in the process of infinity Chemicals such as oil refining, petrifaction and so on, while the homogeneous catalysis sysytem is chosen in the process of the fine chemicals. As catalyst used in the former is easy to separate and recycle, but with harsh operating condition and slow reaction velocity, while that used in the latter, is difficult to separate and recycle though it has rapid reaction velocity and mild operating condition, it has become the common objective for most scientists and enterprisers to find a catalytic system mergering the advantages of both but without their disadvantages.
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3楼2009-01-06 13:19:13
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zhwj

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谢谢上面两位兄弟
译的都很好
不过我觉得还是都有点一对一“硬”了



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4楼2009-01-07 11:32:46
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chichicui

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zhwj(金币+1,VIP+0):呵呵 我觉得已经很好了只是觉得最后一句还需润色一下 非常感谢
不好意思啊,俺就这水平了
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5楼2009-01-07 19:40:20
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michaelyan

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In the production of Chemicals, over 80% of chemicals are obtained(avoid repetition) by means of the Catalyst Technology-employment of catalysis systems. Generally, a heterogeneous catalysis system is used to treat infinite Chemicals in processes such as oil refining, petrifaction, et, while a homogeneous catalysis sysytem is employed to process fine chemicals. A heterogeneous catalyst is easy to separate and recycle, yet it works with harsh operating condition and slow reaction rate. On the contrary, a homogeneous catalyst can help to achieve high reaction rate and works well under mild reaction conditions. However, it is generally more difficult to be seperated from the reactants and recycled. Hence, it has become a common objective for many scientists and enterprises to find a catalytic system mergering the advantages of both catalytic systems while avoiding the disadvantages of either.
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michaelyan

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不好意思,读完后,还觉得lack coherence...let me try again....but generally楼上的translation conveys the meaning precisely....we just need to work on the style...
7楼2009-01-11 17:08:54
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michaelyan

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Over 80% of chemicals are produced by means of the Catalyst Technology -employment of catalytic systems.There are broadly two kinds of such systems-heterogeneous and homogeneous. Generally, the former is used to treat infinite Chemicals in processes such as oil refining, petrifaction, etc, while the latter is ususally employed to process fine chemicals. Both systems have their prons and cons: a heterogeneous catalyst is easy to be separated and recycled; yet it works with a slow reaction rate and under a harsh operating condition. On the contrary, a homogeneous catalyst can achieve high reaction rate and works well under mild reaction conditions. However, it is generally more difficult to be seperated from the reactants and recycled. Hence, it has become a common objective of many scientists and enterprises to find a catalytic system that combines the advantages of both while avoiding the disadvantages of either.
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michaelyan

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献丑了,我觉得这样更符合老外的阅读习惯
9楼2009-01-11 17:14:17
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