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求各位帮忙忙看看这句话是够有错误(超级电容器方向) These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer.
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paperhunter: 金币+1, 鼓励交流 2017-01-23 14:54:28
These features are representative of the energy storage,which is the characteristics of an electric double layer.

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2楼: Originally posted by 海南炒粉好吃 at 2017-01-22 19:47:21
These features are representative of the energy storage,which is the characteristics of an electric double layer.

These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer, which may have resulted from the hollow tubular and unique through-pore structures. 我的全句是这样的,审稿人认为前半句有语法错误,麻烦帮忙再看一看
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paperhunter: 金币+1, 鼓励交流 2017-01-23 14:54:45
These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer
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These features represent the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer

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paperhunter: 金币+1, 鼓励交流 2017-01-23 14:54:54
刚刚请教了下我们office的一个老外,他给的建议是:
These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
可以改为:
These features formed a representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
或者改为:
These features served as a representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
另外,他说楼主的那句话那么表示也是ok的.

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6楼: Originally posted by unsure at 2017-01-23 10:39:51
刚刚请教了下我们office的一个老外,他给的建议是:
These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double
可以改为:
These features formed a representative of  ...

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5楼: Originally posted by nono2009 at 2017-01-23 09:18:18
These features are representative of the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer
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These features represent the energy storage characteristics of an electric double layer

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