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isaacshirui

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[求助] 请朋友们帮忙指出一下我的套磁信中的不妥之处。多谢了

Dear Prof. Rossi:
I am very sorry to bother you, but I’m really wish to contact you. My name is Rui SHI, I’m a postgraduate student in North China Electric Power University(NCEPU), my major is condensed matter physics theory. I wish to work with you as a full-time Ph.D. student. Thank you very much for reading this email.
When I was a undergraduate student, my major was plant protection, but I had never given up my dream, I tried my best to be a postgraduate student majoring in physics, so, I can promise that I will hardworking for the research because I am really interest in physics and have sufficient mental preparations to cope with any difficulties in the future. In the period of graduate study, my research area is condensed matter theory and my paper has been accepted by 4th annual 2016 International Conference on Material Science and Environmental Engineering.
I have read your paper “Microscopic modeling of scattering quantum non-locality in semiconductor nanostructures”, I think the idea in your article is as excellent as density function theory, because the DFT has been used to describe Polyatomic system successfully, so, in my opinion ,the density matrix is also suitable for the Quantum System due to the density matrix include all eigenvalues of all wave functions. The “diagonal limit” is a wonderful via to solve the problem of density matrix elements, the conclusion shows that the time derivative of the spatial carrier density is corresponding to the Gaussian density profile when △z =3.5 nm, when △z→∞, the time variation tend to zero, so, I think you find the critical value about the size for Quantum theory can be used.
I am really interest in how to use quantum theory to describe the microstructure. After I read your paper, I think you are very intelligent and I have confidence to learn more knowledge and experiences about the research of quantum theory . Please find attached my current CV if you would like to know more about me. Look forward to hearing from you.
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Alexxian

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个人觉得有点拖沓了,可以精简一下

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Adamfei

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第一句可以删了 尴尬,内容上陶瓷不用扯什么dream什么的 多给点实在的 此外表达上还需润色。

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Alexxian

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哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈

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isaacshirui

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2楼: Originally posted by Adamfei at 2016-11-30 13:06:11
第一句可以删了 尴尬,内容上陶瓷不用扯什么dream什么的 多给点实在的 此外表达上还需润色。

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