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Hello, everyone. Happy Middle Moon Festival (Middle Autumn Festival)! Do you eat the mooncake? Even though I do no like it very much when I was in domestic, I hope to taste it. Unfortunately, it is too expensive in Asia supermarket. This is my first time to enjoy this holiday in oversea. No surprise! No activities! No atmosphere!----- |
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Thanks£¬serious Chinglish style. Mid-Autumn Festival or Moon Cake Day. I heard you are in overseas, moon cakes, domestic is an adjective, i didn't like it ...... ·¢×ÔСľ³æAndroid¿Í»§¶Ë |
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Thank you very much for pointing out the mistakes. I am still on the way to improve my writing in English. Please keep in touch! Thanks!
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