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[求助] 汉译英,求润色,谢谢

这段英语是我自己翻译的,求大家帮我润色一下,感觉太中文了,水平确实不行。

The substrate used in the experiment was the Ni-based superalloy and was cut into samples of 48mm×6mm×1mm. The bond coat was NiAl and NiCoCrAlY. The cemiric coating was yttria stabilized zirconia (YSZ). The deposition technology was the low pressure plasma sprayed (LPPS) process and electron beam- physical vapour deposition (EB-PVD).
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可否把汉语放下面,方面翻译。
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2楼2016-08-18 20:38:46
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wxqtjw: 金币+25, 翻译EPI+1 2016-08-19 10:46:22
The substrate used in this experiment was Ni-based superalloy that was sliced into the size of 48mm×6mm×1mm. 【The bond coat was NiAl and NiCoCrAlY. The cemiric coating was yttria stabilized zirconia (YSZ). 】???。。。
Low pressure plasma sprayed (LPPS) process and electron beam- physical vapour deposition (EB-PVD) technology was used to...
内容太专业,楼主还是放中文吧,然后把几个重要的专业术语列出,这样才好修改。
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3楼: Originally posted by kyle_2016 at 2016-08-18 21:18:24
The substrate used in this experiment was Ni-based superalloy that was sliced into the size of 48mm×6mm×1mm. 【The bond coat was NiAl and NiCoCrAlY. The cemiric coating was yttria stabilized zircon ...

中文:采用LPPS或EB-PVD工艺将粘结层(NiAl 或 NiCoCrAlY)沉积到基体上,将陶瓷层(YSZ)沉积到粘结层上。
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4楼2016-08-19 10:46:17
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4楼: Originally posted by wxqtjw at 2016-08-19 10:46:17
中文:采用LPPS或EB-PVD工艺将粘结层(NiAl 或 NiCoCrAlY)沉积到基体上,将陶瓷层(YSZ)沉积到粘结层上。...

The substrate used in this experiment was Ni-based superalloy that was sliced into the size of 48mm×6mm×1mm. The bond coat is made up of NiAl and NiCoCrAlY, while the ceramic layer (cemiric coating?) is made up of yttria stabilized zirconia(YSZ). [陶瓷层用ceramic layer还cemiric coating,楼主自己看看相关专业文献吧]. Ceramic layer was first deposited to bond coat layer by low pressure plasma sprayed (LPPS) process or electron beam-physical vapour deposition (EB-PVD) technology, and then the processed bond coat layer was deposited to matrix using same technology.[这句是否与楼主想要表达意思相近?]
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