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Four special FBG based sensors were developed to monitor an artificial landslide, which is located in Nanjing, China. Based on the strength of the rod sensor, two sensors were named as “hard sensors” (No.1 and No.2), the other two were named as “soft sensors” (No.3 and No.4). For Two FBG were fixed on a rod for each sensor, one is 50 centimeters from the top of rod (upper FBG), and another is 100 centimeters from the top of rod (lower FBG). In the experiment of this paper, four special sensors were installed in the slope of artificial landslide, which was made by machine and manual excavation. A sensing system including four special sensors, optical fiber, static fiber grating demodulation instrument (SM125), PC and related software were integrated in fiber sensing system. And a large number of strain data can be collected by using this system during artificial landslide experiment in this study. The results of this research show that the lower FBGs are more sensitive than the upper FBGs among the four sensors. The Sensor No.2 and No.4 are more capable of monitoring small-scale landslide than Sensor No.1 and No.3. Due to the difference in strength, hard sensors are more adaptable to coarse environment for big landslide. Thus, hard sensors should be installed near the landslide are while in a distance to landslide body for soft sensors. In addition, a clear tendency of strain variation can be monitored by soft sensors, which will be used in landslide prediction and hazard alarm.

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第一句：制作四个基于FBG的传感器，用于检测人工滑坡，地点位于中国南京。
第二句：基于传感器杆子的刚性，两个传感器被命名为硬质传感器，其余两个为软传感器。
第三句：每个传感器都有两个FBG固定在上面，一个距离杆子顶端50cm，另一距离为100cm。
第四句：在论文的实验中，四个特制的传感器被安装在一个准备进行人工滑坡的斜坡上，滑坡是通过机器和人工挖掘产生的。（这句感觉翻译的最差）
第五句：一个传感系统包含四个特质传感器，光纤，静态解调仪，PC和相应的软件，他们都被集成在一起。
第六句：研究的结果表明：低FBG比高FBG具有更好的敏感性，对于四个传感器都是如此。传感器2和4比1和3更能监测到小的滑坡。
第七句：估计其刚性的不容，硬质传感器适用于更粗放的环境，用以监测大的滑坡。
第八句：因此，硬质传感需要需要安装在距离滑坡比较近的地方，而软质的需要距离远一些。
第九句：此外，由软质传感器监测得到的应变变化趋势，可能用于滑坡预报和灾害预警。
Four special FBG based sensors were developed to monitor an artificial landslide, which is located in Nanjing, China. Based on the strength of the rod sensor, two sensors were named as “hard sensors” (No.1 and No.2), the other two were named as “soft sensors” (No.3 and No.4). For Two FBG were fixed on a rod for each sensor, one is 50 centimeters from the top of rod (upper FBG), and another is 100 centimeters from the top of rod (lower FBG). In the experiment of this paper, four special sensors were installed in the slope of artificial landslide, which was made by machine and manual excavation. A sensing system including four special sensors, optical fiber, static fiber grating demodulation instrument (SM125), PC and related software were integrated in fiber sensing system. And a large number of strain data can be collected by using this system during artificial landslide experiment in this study. The results of this research show that the lower FBGs are more sensitive than the upper FBGs among the four sensors. The Sensor No.2 and No.4 are more capable of monitoring small-scale landslide than Sensor No.1 and No.3. Due to the difference in strength, hard sensors are more adaptable to coarse environment for big landslide. Thus, hard sensors should be installed near the landslide are while in a distance to landslide body for soft sensors. In addition, a clear tendency of strain variation can be monitored by soft sensors, which will be used in landslide prediction and hazard alarm.
试改如下，谨供参考。
Four FBG based sensors were developed to monitor an artificial landslide located in Nanjing, China. Based on the strength of their rod, two sensors were named as “hard sensors” (No.1 and No.2), the other two as “soft sensors” (No.3 and No.4). Two FBGs were fixed on (the rod of) each sensor, 50 cm and 100 cm from the top of the rod, respectively (upper FBG and lower FBG). The sensors were installed in the slope to be (artificial) slided by machine and manual excavation. The sensing system included four special sensors, optical fiber, static fiber grating demodulation instrument (SM125), PC and related software. (And a large number of strain data can be collected by using this system during artificial landslide experiment in this study.) The results of this study showed that the lower FBGs were more sensitive than the upper ones (among the four sensors). The Sensor No.2 and No.4 were more capable of monitoring small-scale landslide than Sensor No.1 and No.3 (为什么？). (Due to the difference in strength,) the hard sensors are more suitable to hard environment of big landslide （不知文中有否证据？). Thus, hard sensors should be fixed near the landslide while the soft ones farer from the landslide. In addition, a clear tendency of strain variation can be detected by the soft sensors, which may be used in landslide prediction and hazard alarm.