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Director and personator
        Along with the fantastic development of society,entertainment has become more and more popularity and more and more people pay close attention to it,especially youngling.but recent years,we can find out a large number of bad news from television、magazine、internet and so on in the entertainment world,such as sex scandal between director and personator.
        This phenomenon may be caused by the increasing right of director and expanding desire of personator.in the one place,peoples attention lead to a mount of money inpour to the entertainment world ,to acompany with it,the director use their right to acquire something which should not get it.in the second place,it is not myth to became famous in a short-team.so many people are eager to enter into the entertainment world,some actress has nothing but beautiful face and body.they are trying to make use of resource that they have to exchange a role in some films.last but not least,our media have transformed rapidly and paparazzo become more large and special.they show many secrets that something we impossible known it as soon as possible.
        In my own perspective,every coin has two sides,we should not say it is right or not which we can not certain about.we shuld attempt to choice good and throw away bad.we shuld make some regulation which limit or monitor be out of the law action of director and through rigorious examine to personator.l believe that few scandal will happening in the entertainment world.
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we shuld attempt to choice good and throw away bad
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2楼2008-11-18 12:42:38
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