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YoungPP

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[求助] 小弟写了一篇英语作文,想提升下水平,请各位帮忙批改!菜鸟一枚,感激不尽 已有1人参与

Will E-book Replace Traditional Book?       
  “Have you ever read an E-book?”If someone ask you this question,the answer may be solitary.”Certainly I have”.In the past ten years, great changes are taking place around us.Everyone can download whatever he wants in the internet.And thereby,the style of read also vary a lot.Currently,it’s always reported that”The popularity of E-book is overwhelming ”.
   Given to an investigation about the way of reading , the majority of people strictly cling to the point that “Traditional book will finally be instead by E-book”.Why are they so sure about this?They list three reasons as follows.Frist of all, the cost would be reduced significantly if the E-Book is general used, both to the publishers and the readers.Because the price of E-book may be less than one-tenth of the traditional one.What’s more, no more wood will be used in making paper-book.Secondly,E-book is so portable that you can read it in anytime,or anywhere,just equipped with a laptop or cellphone.Finally,the way to acquire the knowledge is rather simple and rapid than that of triditional one.You only need to click the mouse instead of borrowing it from library or buying it from the shop.
   As to me,I believe the traditional books have done great contribution to the civilization of human.However,it gets bare virtue compared with the E-book.Consequently,I think it is the the development of the world that the traditional book is to be replaced by E-book.
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1 someone ask 应该是asks
2 英语“,”后一般空一格
3 Everyone can download whatever he wants in the internet. download后一般加sth 另,on the Internet
4 They list three reasons as follows建议改为There are three reasons listed as follows.
5 Frist of all, the cost would be reduced significantly if the E-Book is general used, both to the publishers and the readers.
is generally used,10楼已有的
frist拼写错误,改为first。   另此句尾应用“,”下一句Because小写并入这一句保持句子的完整性。
6 As to me,I believe the traditional books have done great contribution to the civilization of human.
Contribute 这里的用法有点奇怪,可以直接说 have greatly contributed to

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YoungPP: 金币+5, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢你的指点,感觉都很在理,帮助很大,谢谢~~ 2016-03-31 14:53:38
Ask anyone on the street whether he or she has ever read an e-book, and the answer is almost always "Sure, I have"
So many people either own or have played with Internet-capable smart phones nowadays that any opinion poll about e-books is really a discussion after the fact  No one doubts the popularity of e-books, only if and when ALL traditional books will be replaced due to their higher cost and limited availability

NO: singular / solitary
YES: almost always / nearly unanimous

NO: investigation
YES: opion poll / survey

NO: As to me
YES: As for me

??? bare virtue
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Let me take the other side
Let me explain why I think traditional books will NEVER be replaced

You can easily write or draw a sketch in the margins of a printed page
Hypertext or dynamic HTML provide limited cross-referencing capability, but really not the same
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